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AGE: 20
LOC: Mukilteo, WA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: May 12

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Poetry / Let me see
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Shadows circle my eyes Their half-moon crescents a forceful sign. Sleep is a requisite of the mind. The gentle dream-state The flutter of eyelids. The anaphoric rhyme scheme Of dialetic poets. No real rhythm No actual scheme No sense of hymn A silent dream. A floating cloud Cloaked in mist. A flying shroud Its gentle hiss. A dragon gleaming Its length alight Its flow so slow In the dim candlelight. The spider's web gleams with dew Its host spun anew. Prey struggling to be free Snatched up in ...
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Poetry / I would never tell you this
by writermommy
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Haiku/Senryu / 3/4/09
by Deadsage
My heart was certainly warmed by this. Overall this was well though out and on the face very unique. The first stanza is great because it evokes imagery that I've certainly never seen in a haiku. Physics haiku are a unique niche that I think you might find is appealing to all those college students out there who study this everyday, and who sit and debate each other about the nature of what is and is not real. I know that overall these haikus are great in that they use the nature of reality i...
Poetry / CIRCLE
by sadpoet
Bleak, but I really enjoyed this poem. I'll review each individual line and tell you what I believe. Line 1: I respect what this line is saying. Intuitively it seems like a contradiction, but on second and third read I understand what it is this line says. Individually we can shine without effort, and therefore we can be in such a state of being. Good use of evocative imagery. Line 2: Here I'm a little bit confused. Awaiting judgment by whom? Moreover, to earn insignificance wouldn't a person...
Poetry / Threads
by imvanessaclark
Delightful. This amused, entertained, and warmed my heart. The poem is concise in a way most are not, and it is complete in its brevity. From my position as the reader I found there to be a flow to the poem that pleases the mind because while I try to expand the ideas your second stanza infers, I also am reined it from the final stanza. I would hesitate in the first stanza to call anything perfect, but that is a choice best left to those who read. In terms of reaching an audience, your poem i...
Poetry / Phillipe Cousteau Sits at the Stern of Calypso and Experiences a Mid-Life Crisis
by Howard_Bushart
My general impression is positive. This poem reads smoothly as though each individual line has been mulled over, rolled around, tasted and determined fit for human consumption. I admire your diction and the story flows in an insular way. To the end that your poetry is poetry, I think that the tempo is spot on and the flow (my general impression of how the sentences meld) is done well. I really enjoyed the topic too =) The second stanza is my favorite primarily because the flow from animals to...
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