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AGE: 17
LOC: Walnut Grove, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 01

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Poetry / Jill and Jack
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Jill had a broken heart From the fall with Jack Her love had blinded her Made her loose her track Jack held false promises Promises of love Brought her up high Higher, up above Once they reached the top He just looked at Jill Started laughing aloud Then he shoved her down the hill On the fall down Jill was bumped and bruised Her sight was cleared She realized she had been used Jill then realized She had gone astray She no longer knew herself Different for him in everyway She sat and pondered ...
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Poetry / Affecting Me
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Affecting my heart, Affecting my soul I was affected when he took control I told him to quit, I told him no He said, “Come on I’ll take it slow” I started to cry, started to scream I wanted to wake up from this dream He covered my mouth and held me tight I will never forget that night It hurt as he started to begin And even worse when he had it in He was ruff and way to fast It just seemed to last and last It came to an end and I felt dead The memories won’t leave my head He left bruises all ...
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I am not a Barbie girl In this little world You can’t play with me That’s a guarantee I won’t let it fly How about you try I dare you to Just see what I do Try to make me a Barbie girl I’ll fuck up your little world
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Lyrics / Run Away
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I see through the smile on the outside I can see the tears you’re trying to hide I know you want to hide from reality But quit acting on irrationality I know it’s your life you hate Well mine isn’t all that great I need you like you need me On that we can both agree Why are crying Are sick of all the lying Runaway with me Forever and eternity Lets disappear Run away from here Why don’t we run away Why not today I know you’ve got your own way It hasn’t worked yet so why will it today I know ju...
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Poetry / Dead Beat Dad
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Poor little girl she has it so bad Her life is ruined by her dead beat dad She is always happy when they fight Because at least she sees him that night She is living in hell but he doesn’t care Because he is the one that put her there She mostly sits at home all alone In this world she is on here own All she can do is sit and cry tear after tear For the fridge is empty except for beer And the electricity is off because of bills unpaid Slowly her life begins to fade Tonight she might die empty...
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Poetry / There It Is!
When I first started this I had no idea what it was talking about. I loved the twist in the end and how it was your heart. I think this poem is really good and it has excellent rhyming. Megan Renee
As I read this I started humming along with it in my head. I think these lyrics are some that every person can relate to. Especially the part "here we are, living in sin embracing what we’re told what we’re given" I think that the flow was struggled in some areas such as "but don’t you want something more a crown of glory, your name up in lights don’t you want something to live for" But other than that I think it was really good. Megan Renee
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The lyrics as a whole kind of confuse me. I would point out a specific part part, but I read the your lyrics twice and I just couldn't follow along very well. Other than that the flow is overall really good and the lyrics have good continuous rhyme. Megan Renee
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Lyrics / Corporate Whore
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