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AGE:
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LOC: Ghana
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 05
LOC: Ghana
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 05
Hi all, I’m Mariama Abdulai. I’ve been writing for as long as i remember telling my parents that the neighbor’s house was on fire: I was six then. I love to write, and normally illustrate my own stories that I’ve written too. I write, draw, sing and do whatever i want to do. I believe i can do whatever i want to if only i set my mind to it, and strive to finish it. Don’t get me wrong, talent counts too. Please, i would like you guys to review and comment on my work; tell me when I’ve done something wrong and also tell me how to fix it. I love to learn new things and correct my mistakes whenever possible. I guess that’s all…for now.
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When I Die Will i see those beautiful green landscapes? That clear blue sky with occasional touches of white clouds? Will i hear that thunder and see that lightening that scared me as a child at night, But became my interesting companion during my later years? Will the gentle gurgling of the stream comfort me, Lull me to sleep when i have sleepless nights? Or will i be able to run with my dog between the citrus trees, Tasting the air in my mouth? Will i be able to tell those i love How i trul...
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A time will come, When Sagbana; the god of the heavens Will grow angry Tingbani will have annoyed him. For she The goddess of the earth, Preferrred another. The children of Sagbana Will brush the highest points of Tingbani Whispering a warning For the worst is to come. Sanya'isili will flash dangerously above. . . He will come to help his brother. Satahinli will make it worse By frightening the children of the earth With his deep voice and drumming. Wuntanya will watch all this feeble and de...
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Throw me a blanket, would you? My heart feels cold. Add a hot water bottle I can feel it freezing Am i sure of this? No; rather throw me a needle and some thread Cos i can feel it breaking Whilst you are doing that Can you add a bottle of glue? I need to make sure the stitches are intact Actually, i dunno what I'm feeling I went to the hospital Complaining of a heartache They threw me out Saying i was not sane But what do you do in a situation like this? What is the cure for a broken heart? W...
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Throw me a blanket, would you? My heart feels cold. Add a hot water bottle I can feel it freezing Am i sure of this? No; rather throw me a needle and some thread Cos i can feel it breaking Whilst you are doing that Can you add a bottle of glue? I need to make sure the stitches are intact Actually, i dunno what I'm feeling I went to the hospital Complaining of a heartache They threw me out Saying i was not sane But what do you do in a situation like this? What is the cure for a broken heart? W...
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Hello, Hi, Hey All that without my name; Is she with you now? Is that why you can't say my name? I feel so...used Never felt this way before I was so stupid; To have gotten involved I thought the world of you Finally, the perfect one. I gave you my heart, The best part of me You had to stamp it to little pieces, Throwing it back in my face Without so much as a glance To see how crushed i am. I feel like an idiot Gushing out my feelings, Whilst you maintain your cool compose But i tried to ove...
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Oh man, that sounds harsh. To you, i mean. To be used as a carpet is pretty bad. Pretty good wording for lyrics. Good job.
Wow, Bravo! I really enjoyed reading it. You have a wonderful way of displaying emotions. And made a smart move by switching from to Daniel to Rigo. For a while there, i thought it was Daniel you were actually going to talk about. Good one there! Bravo!
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I have to admit that i don't really understand most of the poem (Obviously because bits are in German). I get the part that says they are only children and not much after that, I'm sorry.
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