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AGE: 26
LOC: United States
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 03
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Poetry / The Exposition
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The Blessed Sacrament stands in a golden chamber Surrounded by an artificial golden sunshine On a white marble alter bathed in light, Two candelabras, seven candles each side. Ten tea-lights burn in a semi-circle on the marble steps. The first five pews in front of this sight are empty No one can imagine themselves worthy enough. In the sixth row a couple kneel, Their heads bent, their knuckles touching Like God had designed them that way. Behind them a woman prays furiously, Like a snake her...
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The sun-drenched, thirsty ground crunching underfoot Confirms my location as foreign. The tentacle like embrace that clutches at my breath Confirms my fears as rational. The blood seeking lion Embraces the wide-eyed antelope On a dusty plain reeking of thirst and loss. Two bodies entwined, unified By an unflinching survival instinct The outcome is predetermined Still the antelope struggles. A jaw clamped on a delicate skull, Muscles taut, tense then silence As the struggle ends with a single ...
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Parcels and Parlances The arrival of the stamp-covered package Caused quite a stir in my house. The hushed excited tones of my mother’s voice Describing the appearance of the item in question As if it were a baby abandoned on our doorstep Miles of bubble wrap and cellophane later I surveyed The sad little pile of clothes Remnants of an abrupt departure. The morning I left they tarred the street outside his flat. I imagine my replacement walking on smoother, warmer ground. Folded carefully ins...
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Overall I think this is well written, I understand only too well what you are trying to convey but the words you use don't really make me feel it. I'm impressed by the structure of the poem, I just feel like you have more to say than what you are sharing with the reader.
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This story started off really well, mystery, intrigue and it was heavy with impressive imagery. I read this short story once from start to finish and at the end found myself wondering why you chose the setting of a courtroom? Is it because of the emotional judgement that we are made aware of later? Also you use a lot of symbols, like the cat and the judge carved on the back of a chair: "it depicted cats playing fiddles while a judge looked away, disinterested." What does this contribute to th...
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I loved the imagery in this poem, the poet's vision seems very clear and they have a nice form of expression. Very exact,very daring and enjoyable to read.
This poem conveys the wealth of emotion that we invest in the ones we love, we invest ourselves in their successes and we mop up after their failures. It expresses perfectly the constant presence of the people we love in our lives no matter what. It took me all the way back to sports day and my pathetic collection of bronze medals.
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