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LOC: Greeley, CO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 18
LOC: Greeley, CO
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 18
Hi , my name is matt im a bit of a new writer if you want to know anything go ahead and ask. Im here to get the input i think i need to help my writing develop, any comments good or bad help thank you in advance.
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I struggled a to pull myslef out of bed for my normal 6:30 in the morning eye opener. I was alone in the apartment still ajusting to life after the roomates had moved out. Soon after my bedtime inducing buzz had taken its effect, i had vivid and utterly depressing dreams i dare not describe in this writing , my loves are saved for a writing all thier own. I awoke in a sweaty half drunken daze to my ex roomate who still at least half lived their seeing how all his shit was yet out of the house...
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Chins up boys lets do this
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It was somewhere around 2:30 in the afternoon I was thinking, smoking a cigarette with a good high school friend on the corner of lost and bored. “What time is it man?” I asked him, slowly he took one are and made a parallel line with the nearest eastern line, with his other he pointed at the sun turned around and smiled a childlike grin at me. “Its about 9:15, WHAT I proclaimed. With a quick look to my phone it was actually 2:20, I was closer. “Why did you say it was 9:15 man”? “In all reali...
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It was somewhere around 2:30 in the afternoon i was thinking, smoking a ciggarete with a good high school friend on the corner of lost and bored. "What time is it man?" i asked him , slowly he took one are and made a parrallel line with the nearest eastern line , with his other he pointed at the sun turned around and smiled a childlike grin at me. "its about 9:15 , WHAT i proclaimed. With a quick look to my phone it was actually 2:20 , i was closer. "Why did you say it was 9:15 man" ? "In all...
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It was somewhere around 2:30 in the afternoon i was thinking smoking a cig with a good high school friend on the corner of lost and bored. "What time is it man?" i asked him , slowly he took one are and made a parrallel line with the nearest eastern line , with his other he pointed at the sun turned around and smiled a childlike grin at me. "its about 9:15 , WHAT i proclaimed. With a quick look to my phone it was actually 2:20 , i was closer. "Why did you say it was 9:15 man" ? "In all realit...
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I like how you started with a well known statement , The last three will a real suprise to me , funny and thoughtful at the same time. It makes someone feel as though you have alot more to say.
HAHAHA nice , a very simple and eliquent statement. After reading it you spend half a second thinking , what did i just read. Then the full force of the statement hits you. Very well rounded.
I think it is a very well written and a great article on your opinion of the movie cloverfield. I do have a couple of complaints though none of which are ment to go agianst your article by any means , you strike me as an avid movie lover like myself and idd just like to point some things out from how i saw things. The Handheld i personaly found that they didnt keep it steady enough and that some of the shots really showed what you would see if you were running around with a handy cam straped ...
Very intresting , ive never gotten the chance to see a consumer frenzy from your point of view. I think its funny how casual everyone was about the launch day, not like the hordes of consumers freaking out into your ears. Highly entertaining , although i would mabey remove some of the fill in the middle it seemed to kinda drag on , although a very awsome story.
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