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AGE: 24
LOC: Wheaton, IL
GEN: Male
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I can never remember little things that make me happiest sometimes so here goes... Thunderstorms at 5:00 in the morning Singin with soul or in other words SANGIN! Sidewalk chalk Nothing to do- this one goes either way but sometimes boredom to me is liberating Mom cut my PB and J in squares today like the good ole days That insta-soap stuff that removes 99.9 percent of bacteria and dissolves right in ur hands Bonding with my hammock Feeling the actual "cush" in my new running shoes Those thing...
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Little circles forming little rings inside my head And intertwining 'round my thoughts of all those words that you had said Brushing up on all the pieces of the puzzle that I knew Would fit together perfectly once I knew that I'd found you The brilliant dance of our intelligence combined to form the line That divided hurt inside your dreams to mold your heart with mine It continued in a pattern forming rows of innocence Being free to cross our conscious paths with utter confidence But the pat...
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I meet your shadow in the dark When the moonlight’s going crazy And all the birds continue singin’ While the world is being lazy That’s the time I love you most Just want to hold you to my heart And whisper stories in your ears About these times we’ve been apart But until then my friend We’ve got to go our separate way And find the light that’s sure to guide Your silhouette to me someday And if it is the real thing O, the Lord can only know To turn the shadows into sunlight Just so I can see ...
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Short Story / A Heart May Beat
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She did not want to believe a word he said. But she listened. She listened hard to his soft words, spilling from his lips. The lips she once desired to kiss. The lips that spoke the words that pierced her soul each time. The aching pain within her heart wanted her to move far far away from the place she was now held captive. But she listened. She listened with everything she had to everything he wanted. Everything being her. She did not budge. She sat there lonely though in the company of a m...
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Poetry / To every soldier
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She stands alone in silence As the tears fall down her face With the crowds of people at her side They sing Amazing Grace She shutters as they walk right by Her hands clenched at her side Why did they send him into war Her only son had died She watches as they fold his flag And set it on the lid She wishes only one more thing To save the work he did While people trembled next to her All she could to was hope That another sunny day would come And that would help her cope If this is where the w...
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Haiku/Senryu / Sponge
SPONGE BOB SQUAREPANTS...ok sorry first thing i thought of when i read this. all sponges need thanks in life...kudos dear
Non-fiction / water and whiskey
love the imagery. great
i love it...very emotional...very vivid with the imagery :) keep it up
Poetry / Morning Shadows
very nice imagery :) love it