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The Second-to-Last Grumly: Twice upon a time, there were all sorts of Grumlies: The fierce, howling Grumlies of the frozen north, And the ordinary Grumlies who prefer suburbs and drive-in movies. In the in between time there were only two. One of them was named Felix. Felix was a Grumly of the ordinary sort. He liked to take walks and share towers of chocolate mice cream with his chums. He had one, long, velvety ear, handy for listening under doors; And ideal for throwing over his shoulder fo...
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Tommy Tooter Or The Boy Who Cried Poopy A Cautionary Tale: Tucked away in a forgotten corner of Alaska, way out past the treeline, is a tiny speck of a town the maps call Paradise, population 72.Paradise is home to all manner of folks, but none so celebrated as Tommy Tooter. This unfortunate boy, with this unfortunate name suffered from a condition folks in the “civilized” world would have diagnosed and medicated long before it got out of hand. But Paradise was far from civilized....
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Brilliant. I am so glad I wasn't drinking milk at the time. I won't waste credits by typing more.
I'd buy the island if I could guarantee myself some naturists... On the whole this is a very fun piece of work. I loved the footnotes (would have loved them more if we could have seen them as such, but the formatting here doesn't allow for it...blasted croats) The criticisms I have are in the realm of punctuation. The opening should either be broken up with periods (instead of commas) or allowed to flow together. The commas throughout do a nice job of seperating thoughts, but they should be s...
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Even though I believe I know who wrote this, I will attempt to Salt the...Summarize my thoughts on the piece. I'm not sure whether you're Salvador Dali, ushering in a brand new way of regarding art, or if you're Chris Proctor the guy in my Freshman P.E. class. I never understood either of them. One of them ended up changing the world, the other oil on late model Buiks. Positive elements: There are a great number of word pictures that club me between the eyes. They follow (I'll not name them a...
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Not my cup of tea, but not bad at all. Your dialogue snaps well. The ending, though somewhat predictable, satisfied in an oddly meloncholic fashion. I figured Ruby had a little more under the hood, but the idea of Carl's drinking problem making everything "better" made me chuckle for a while. If I were to change anything, it would be to streamline things just a bit. "Twice divorced and now three years single...walked instead of crawled." There are a lot of great pictures in this sentence, but...
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