Lunsford's profile
AGE:
59
LOC: Holiday, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 28
LOC: Holiday, FL
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 28
Pat Lunsford has sold two articles to magazine publishers while putting together a portfolio of her short stories, requested by yet another magazine publisher. Having just started out in writing, she seems to have gotten off to a running start.
Family and business have always come first to Pat. Now that she is semi-retired, she is devoting most of her time to writing. Having been in the produce business for more than thirty years, traveling around beautiful farm lands through all of the southern states, meeting some of the most fascinating people, she has much to share.
Writing small articles and stories is something Pat really enjoys, but her novel, Lord of The South, is her passion. She is currently seeking a publisher/agent.
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Emma glanced at Joshua’s plate. “You hardly touched your puddin’, Joshua.” “I’m full. Rake it out into a bowl and I’ll have it later.” Melody leaned on the arm of the sofa as Joshua switched on the television. Huntley and Brinkley were going over the day's headlines on the six o’clock news when he thumbed through the TV guide, saying, “Hey, Melody, there’s a science fiction comin’ on tonight. It’s that one where . . .” she was sound asleep. He went to the kitchen where Emma and Elizabeth were...
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“I came back to Sheldon and got a job here at the restaurant. An old widow woman owned it then and when I told her what happened, she let me move in with her and when she passed away, she left me the restaurant and the house.” “Well, good for you. I’m glad somethin’ good came out if it for you.‘Course, I'm sorry ‘bout the widow.” “I called Gallen soon after and thanked him for all he had done for me and told him if he ever needed a favor not to hesitate and I meant every word of it. There’s n...
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Anna rinsed the last dinner plate as Pete and Jason sat on the floor in their living room listening to the radio with their father. She dried her hands and went to the living room window, peeking out through the darkness at the mansion. After a quick look around, she was about to close the curtains when she saw Amos pull someone to the window in his office by the front of their shirt. It was Gallen. Jake snorted as he catnapped in his chair. She closed the curtains, believing it unnecessary t...
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Gripped with heart-stopping panic, Jake charged from the kitchen, through the dining room to the staircase where he froze in shocking horror, seeing Anna roll down the last few steps, landing in a pile at his feet like a rag doll. “Sweet Jesus!" he cried out, falling to his knees, slipping his arms around her. "Oh good God," he said with a wince, cringing at the feel of her broken bones as huge bubbling tears leapt from his eyes. Cradling her mangled body, he rocked her, caressing her hair, t...
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Synopsis What could a wealthy young man from a high profile family, possibly have in common with a middle-aged black servant, an old British chauffeur, three hard-working black ladies in a small town restaurant and a sixteen-year-old girl? Set in 1950's Deep South, Lord of The South, full of rich imagery, exposes the lives of people from completely different backgrounds, cleverly bringing them together. Like most Southern novels, Lord of The South, envelopes all that is special about the regi...
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Havi's a cute character and you defined him well, and the wolf too. As for suspense . . . Not really nail-biting suspense. You painted a very tense situation, and very well I might add, but more along the lines of a children's novel. That's not meant by any means to be an unsult. It was written very well. Think of the money that 'Lion King, Jungle Book and all books of that nature have earned. I would finish this as a children's story. Someone once told me that my story was like reading a chi...
Thank you Jay for the advice. You touched on some good points. You're writing is straightforward and to the point. I'm not sure what you're looking for. It certainly doesn't fit into fiction or novel. It reads more like an article. Nevertheless, it was interesting. I read every word and appreciate the advice. Maybe you should go to www.helium.com and post this there. It's mostly for magazine articles and where I hang out. If you drop by, type Pat Lunsford into the search bar there and all my ...
One thing I noticed is the narrators voice keeps jumping from an intelligent voice with good language skills to a hard to read diacelect. It should be one or the other and be consistent. The part about your dad was cleaver and well done. Having him back on your fourteenth birthday, clean and sobber brought a smile to my face. So you evoked emotion. Very good. The mug who devised that punishment must have been a couple of fries short of a happy meal . . . This phrase is way over used and may g...
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