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AGE: 32
LOC: Oxford, MS
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: June 25

I am a thirty year old once divorced twice married southern boy with two lovely children and one on the way. I love to read and only over the past few years decided to take up writing or attempting to thanks to my divorce. i found a new way to relieve stress and unwind through writing. feel free to review any and all things i post i welcome any critique.

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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Chapter 11 of "Unspoken Rules"
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John woke up early and went for a jog. He needed to clear his mind and get his head straight so he could be there for his dad today. Anna’s funeral was scheduled for mid afternoon and there were still plenty of things that needed to be done around the house. He knew his dad would not be in any shape to do the things necessary. When he returned from his jog amber was up in the kitchen preparing a country breakfast. There was enough grease in that kitchen to clog five grown men’s arteries. The...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Ch. 4 "Unspoken Rules"
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Sunday morning brought no change in Mrs. McClellan’s status; after a good night’s sleep “Big Cotton” got up early to eat his usual breakfast. He had eaten the same thing every morning of his life. Three eggs scrambled, two sausage patties, four pieces of bacon, a side of toast, and either a bowl of oatmeal or grits; usually grits during the warmer months. Today was no different after he was finished he went back upstairs to get dressed for church. He arrived at church and parked in the same ...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / 3rd chapter "Unspoken Rules"
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When the plane finally touched down and John was able to leave the airport in the post 9/11 world it was almost nine in the evening and he was beat. As he arrived at the Peabody to check in, the concierge in formed him that his assistant had already made dinner reservations for him at Chez Paul’s in the hotel lobby for around ten. He smiled to himself partially because of Maggie and partially because of where he was in a place he had not been in years. He went to his room freshened up and we...
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I went for a late night truck ride; All I could think of was you and I. I road the dirt roads the ones you loved, I drank my favorite beer a light bud. At the end of your favorite I turned on the four-wheel drive, And pulled out past the trees and ditch where we used to come alive. The moon was out shining almost white, It was close to perfect except you weren’t there tonight. I let the tailgate down and sat with a beer that was cool; And thought of all the things I did to lose you what a foo...
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Poetry / "Hello"
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“Hello” I was walking along the path today, And noticed the morning dew. I knew it was time for my morning meeting, The one I always attend with you. About the time you wash your hair, And poor your morning brew. I am sitting at the kitchen table, Right across from you. Today you seemed so lonely, And very lost in thought. I saw a tear in your eye, And you asked “could this be all my fault?” I tried to wipe your tear, I tried to dry your eye. But all we seem to do to each other, Is always say...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Shifter: A Killer of Many Faces
I loved it and that surprises me since i normally do not go for this type of story. there were a few rough patches as far as wording was concerned but nothing that could not be corrected. i think you have a great story keep up the good work. i really loved the ending you had me fooled all the way till the end.
Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Sin, Underground - Prologue
This is wonderful. I truly enjoyed it the only thing that I did not like is that there is not more to read. in just a few words and sentences you have captivated your audience. I look forward for the opportunity to read more of this and see where it leads. I am guessing the man in the confesstional is a demon or something of a supernatural power but I like how you leave that up to the reader. I guess the man could even be Francesca's son and the padre's son. Keep up the good work. I look forw...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Stoned Immaculate
A very different point of view but I liked where it was going I would love to read more. To find out more about the main character. Why is he stoned? What caused his bovious paranoia? Is it a result of the drugs? Why the fascination of Jim Morrison? It is obvious he killed the two girls. But Why? And when? There are too many unanswered questions in this small excerpt of writing. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more.
Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / On the other side
Washington; but from people ....change this to Washington. People ... Drop the "but from" and just start your sentence this reads better. him enough to actually form.... drop the word actually Now, my role in .... drop "now" start with My A little long on the childhood you had painted a well enough picture early on it seemed to lose some interest. I do realizr that this maybe in order to lay the ground work for additional chapters but without those to read this is my first take on it. Good wr...
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