LuckyHabit's profile

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AGE: 25
LOC: Rosamond, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 15

I have been writing since I could hold a crayon. I LOVE words.
I don’t write what I feel I write what I think. If you can not accept this concept, please don’t review my work.
I paint, draw, write, design, take pictures, crochet, sew, cook, bake, love, laugh & live.
I am open to make friends. I’m picky about who I choose & change my mind sometimes without reason.

I’m losing hope in humanity.
I’m at peace with myself.

I’m lost in the world I have created. I’m hopeful for something to bring light into my dark artists cave so I can view the rainbow of thoughts I have expressed throughout my life in the paintings I have painted, in the photos I have taken, in the words I have written, in the blankets I hav…

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Poetry / Vegas Prey
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So easily I stalk my prey in the darkness I gently play dancing around the cold center pole my white outfit emits the brightest glow I need to be seen I live to be spotted they’ll never understand my attack is plotted I keep my eyes on the one that’s looking he’s caught and unaware locked into my stare memorized by my body so bare he likes the shape longs to rest his hands upon my curves & contours with my eyes alone I make him quiver with my touch I feel him shiver I whisper softly ‘don’t be...
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kill for love, killed by love
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Poetry / your words
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Certified but not yet a copy write by me, Your words tend to hypnotize me, Your touch tends to paralyze me, I just wanted to let you know I'm excited to learn & grow from the one I love. Thanks much for all I am sure you'll teach me, because of the level that your words reach me, not only cuz your sweet, but because mentally w e meet.
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Poetry / Loves Shade
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Sunny days are what I crave, Mystified by Love's Shade. I Write because it's the only way, I Know How to Release My Hate. I Once Believed in Fate, Thought I had a Destiny. Then I Saw there was none of that, None for Stephanie. If There is a GOD, He Does Nothing but Test Me. I've Been Down Almost Every Road, I Know the World Interests Me. Like a Sunny Day Spent, Lurking in Love's Shade. I Promise to Journey Out, Lock Away My Shame & Doubt. Celebrate My Life, My Words, My Paint, Because Those a...
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Poetry / Life in Poetry
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Wake up life isn’t a dream it’s a kill or be killed world in this war ran circular pan or pot whatever you jot some call earth & since birth I was blessed with a heart that cared less about what was on the mind of my logical peers it did as it chose wrote letters in rows on walls big & small in bathroom stalls on trash cans at the mall till I found myself With a busted pencil writing lyrics in juvenile hall that’s how I started it all with boredom & hatred bottled & agitated left alone withou...
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Poetry / Love Failure
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congratulations on your publication definitely something to write about as well as something to sum up your life as a writer good job meeting the criteria for this project
Passion, heartbreak, loss, yearning so many emotions in so few words brilliant truth, well spoken.
Descriptive Direct no over usage of words no under usage of description nice flow longing lonely yearning sorrow so many more incredible feelings felt in this poem I can relate from both sides I think it is wonderful well done good luck in getting it published, not that you need it
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Short Story / Six word memoir
Great short story! However, I do not feel it meets the criteria for "Brevity is the Soul of It": Six-Word Memoirs about the Creative Life simply because it is NOT about "the creative life" however it IS about life. More so I don't think ANY soldier should be 'unknown' or forgotten. But I think many feel unknown & or forgotten, a tragedy. Continue writing soldier. Great job but be careful for what criteria you are wanting to be reviewed for it can make or break your reviews. You are now known.