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16 A Rebel Amidst The Wicked The elder Pegasus warrior, Pent, stopped suddenly. He looked back and called to his leader in his language. “Sar Kendra, dect!” Hearing the request to come, Kendra moved away from the others that had joined her and her Pegasus’ as they scouted around for signs of Silver-wings friends and family. As she came toward Pent, he pointed with a hoof. “Wyx.” Kendra looked down at the body of a young creature, it’s throat slit from one side to the other. She spoke softly a...
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Water cascaded over her, her face turned into the spout. She jerked her head out and peaked around the shower curtain and listened. What had that sound been? She heard it again quickly, the sound of something moving around in the house. The cat, she decided quickly, knowing the feline was normally running around about this time, but then she saw it. The cat sat on the water tank of her toilet licking his paw like he belonged there. Then she heard it again, louder. The Siamese cat stopped gro...
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Kalla Long stood in her room, just standing and looked around. She had recently moved, just a few months ago; a new home, and a new life and it always amazed her to see it, but also unnerved her to know how much she was now expected to do. Kalla looked down at her left arm, and raised it to eye level, wrist turned toward her. A memory from a year ago and an old life. Lowering her arm, Kalla moved to the bed in the middle of the room. Nothing extravagant, just a simple full sized bed with a s...
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9 Eht Segunton (The Pegasus’) Anien and Enrah stood at the river’s edge with Rixir the next day. Enrah clasped his hands. “Thank you for your hospitality. We will never forget that.” Rixir smiled at him. “You are quite welcome, and you may stay longer if you’d like. It does get lonely over here.” Anien spoke up. “Thank you, but no, Rixir, we need to get to our destination as soon as we can.” Rixir and Enrah unclasped hands then Enrah shouldered his bag of food that Rixir had given them, along...
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5 The Dreams Anien sat on a stump in the sand rubbing her feet as Enrah walked to her, dropping a load of stringed fish at her feet. “We’re going to go easy on food and drink for a while, this is the only stream near here, there’s another, but it’s past the desert.” He wiped his brow with the back of his arm, and looked up at the sun. “I think we should make camp here; in a few moments the sun will disappear behind the trees, and it’s not a good idea to travel the woodlands at night,” Anien d...
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I liked this. I don't really know much about screenplays, and I would have to be honest and say some of the British lingo did confuse me, but not enough that I couldn't read the script and get into it. It was enough that I could actually *see* the movie taking place in my head. And other than the few minor mistakes/typos. I don't believe I noticed anything else.
I've read and re read and re re read the first part to make sure i wasn't mistaking, but at the very beginning it seems like it's supposed to be first person: " After this I looked, and there " "right down to the scones he had on the walls for light and the marble flooring he had put in, the outside of the house was done in a stone look. The roof was dark and on the out side he had real scones that gave little light, but that was not the point of the oil fueled scones." In my opinion, the wor...
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