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I liked your use of an archaic sort of speech at the beginning- it flowed nicely, in tune with itself. However. They’d been obeying God all the while (secretly at first, so as not arouse the suspicions of the other gods) and as per instruction, the old and tiny places of reverence, the ‘holy’ places - sacred and powerful were where alters had been left in remembrance. The second half of this sentence I found to be slightly awkward. I believe a second hyphen is required after 'sacred and power...