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AGE:
39
LOC: Brooklyn, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 04
LOC: Brooklyn, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 04
Mother and artist. It should be that simple but as you all know it’s not and has never been. Everthing that can be defined can also be taken this way or that depending on the other persons preceptions or what said definition means to them.
I’ve writen thousands of poems, self published both a historical novel and an anthology of poetry. Still my grestest accomplisment are my kids.
I hope you enjoy what you read here.
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Kiesha hurried down a back alley on her way to the train station on Canal Street. She knew it was a bit more isolated and a little darker, but she was tired and this was a short cut and she’d taken it many times before without incident, so what the hell. At nine o’clock in the evening, it had been a very long day starting at five this morning and wasn’t even close to being over yet. As soon as Kiesha got home, there were e-mails to send out and phone calls to make. She had to make sure everyo...
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I sold my soul for this...abiguity
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I had to rate this piece low because it drags from beginning to end. I found myself having to look away in an attempt to refocus my attention in order to get through it. The voice in the piece failed to draw me in from the beginning and it got more stale and fragmented as the peice went along. Perhaps some of the problems with the peice can be fixed by picking up the pace. Self editing is hard I should know because I hate doing it myself, but it has to be donw in order to get rid of the thing...
it almost seems like just six random words thrown at the page then left for further interputation. It's not clear what if anything the author has to say or is feeling. The best writing is something the reader can in somewya relate to. I couldn't relate to this in anyway on any level.
There is a lyrical quality to this I like very much. It could be the start of a peom or a line in a short story.
The sadness and personal truth of this can be felt through each word. It is however a feeling unfortunately shared by way too many people.
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