I wanna take a trip to hotel Cecil. lol. I enjoyed reading this, it made me feel good inside. Thanks.

Coming from you (Which i don't know you) and by reading your thing whatever you call it, you wont care what i have to say anyone. And plus I'm over 'Amercian Seas' not fighting war but just not replying to what anyone has to say either. But it kinda comes off as your really an ass and it's not humor you're really upset with whatever it was that you were talking about. Hey! but have a good day.

Lost me on this one buddy. But i still kinda understand it. I'm looking forward to read more of your writings i like the way you put it together.

Your daughter is a very lucky kid. I hope you go far with what your doing.

I liked how you stayed on the rhyme patter, but sometimes switching it up is alright. It kinda reminded me of some old rap lyrics. Maybe taking a stab at writing a song is a good idea.