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AGE: 22
LOC: Nederland, TX
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: August 10

Just a young man trying to survive the ups and downs of our ever so unimportant existance.

Chad Simoneaux

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Quotes / Children
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"We are all children, some have just been around longer." - Me
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Poetry / Pack a Bodybag
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These knives are waiting For Justice For Revenge These boys have been wronged By Society By Everyone These girls cry because No one loves them No one holds them These bullets are flying Toward Freedom Toward Dominance And you can see it all on the 10 'o' clock news The 24-hour news The "nothing's new" news These teens are drinking To Escape To Forget These Trucks are rolling Toward Capitalism Toward destroying the bridge forming between the rich and the poor! Nature's fury evicted these peopl...
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Poetry / Tulip Dreams
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Late at night, When I'm all alone... I think of your arms... I call them my home. Their touch I've felt, If only in my dreams... I wonder, Do you have such thoughts of me...? I find myself spellbound, By your ever-flowing charm... So delightfully ahead of your time... So woefully far from me. All in time they say. They have never felt what I feel. They will never know how I love. Time is infinite, Infinitely in between you and I. Man created time, and so shall he destroy it. Anything that sta...
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Poetry / Inner Vision
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Two, two, a sword and a pen... It is with these that revolutions begin. The brute force of an idea cannot be quelled. Everything has it's time... Everything has a purpose! The time for rebirth is now. Our movement will not stray from its purpose. Our credo, our mission statement... Is to end the systems of thought that lead to hatred, to war, to injustice. These cyclic displays of despotism will come to an end. We will be heard. If it seems that no one is listening... Perhaps we are not being...
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Six pounds is all it takes. All it would have taken. I think, of what that six pounds would have taken though... From those that do care. From those that care now. From those that will care and need caring. From those that love... From those that need my love... That fucking bitch that didn't care. Would not have cared. If those six pounds would have taken my life. She might have enjoyed the fact that she had that much weight pressing on me. Squishing my mind to jelly... For that bitch...had ...
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Novel Treatments / Barbwire Horizon
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I like the concept, and the ideas behind it, especially the pov of the child/mother interaction... But there was too much repetition! But there was too much repetition! Heh, even for lyrics, repetition gets...repetitive. -laughs- That's what refrains are for! Cheers and keep writing! LNE
I like your style. You really seem to animate the characters and give them life. Hope to read more by you soon. :)
Criticism / Dancer in the Dark
:) Don't know of much I can say other than I agree on several points.
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Looks like this could really take off. I like the way you develop your characters, they seem pretty believeable! Keep up the good work, cant wait to read more!
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