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too cute it rhymes well, flows well. reminds me of Silverstein almost. could even be just a bit longer. but really doesn't need much touch. You have definitely a talent for rhyme.

Great. At first I had a time telling if this was a cat or dog but then you mentioned kneading and I gathered they were cats. It's an excellent description of what cats think when we're gone.

This has potential. It reminded me at the beginnig with the electro-erasa-majigger and mice cream of Dr. Seuss style writing. Because it is a childrens book you might want to be careful of the bigger words such as mellifluous. I had to even look that up but it could be educational at the same time. A good ending I think would be to get the other characters to start singing with him. They sort of come around to Felix's and Veta's way of thinking or singing if you will. Kind of like in Happy Fe...

Normally I'm not really into reading SCI FI stuff but this was actually pretty good. A little difficult in keeping up with all of the characters. This is much like a soap opera or romance novel in space or futuristic type of genre. I did find myself wanting to read to the end though so thats a definite sign of publishable.