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AGE:
21
LOC: Chapin, SC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 20
LOC: Chapin, SC
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: October 20
I’m Lizzy, my pen name is L.C. Miller..I love writing and reading!
my heart may be broken
my soul may be torn
my love may be ripped
my kiss may be silent
but my creativity will never cease
myspace.com/momsyndrome ADD ME :D
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One by one The months seem to fly. Beat by beat My heart starts to die. Blink by blink The tears that I cry. Guilt by guilt I’m living a lie. Thought by thought Can’t forget as I try. Sigh by Sigh I know you’re that guy. Day by day I’m saying goodbye.
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As the end draws near Towards the middle of the year Anticipation is in the air Who will live or die, it’s hard to bear What will happen when the clock strikes twelve Number seven will fly off the shelves It’s hard to say what the outcome will be When we turn the page we shall see Who’s evil, who’s good What could happen, what should One thing is for certain, you can’t deny At least one character is going to die As Harry Potter comes to a close Everyone all read...
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I search for the love I had for you In the darkest part of my soul I cannot find this love I bury my tears with anger I will never dig up those tears I will not think of you My worst fears realized You have made me this way Thus I have allowed myself this torture I can’t forgive the sun for shining on you I am the one who looked towards the light Took that step into the bright chaos Now there is no light left Darkness surrounds my heart Numb from the fate that was meant to kill me The ...
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Poor tormented soul, falsely accused Is it such a wrong thing to love another Punished for which he did not commit Never to be himself again Stripped of body and soul for the sake of life instead of death Cursed by the ones who did him wrong Damned to walk the world alone and destroyed with hate and anger coarsing through his veins The Count of Monte Cristo will have his revenge
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You had that usual smile on your face like nothing could take its place we had a lot of fun that day didn't we those few hours you spent with me you rushed around trying to get the party ready I said, "slow down we have plenty of time keep it nice and steady" Time....time was what I thought we had on that cold November day We finally finished as you said, "Hooray." As I got up to leave you held me in a tight embrace Me silly me not knowing that would be the last time ...
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WOW!! this reminds me of the relationship i was end..well more or less the beginging. Really awesome work, you should be proud of your talent. Overall I didn't see any specific errors, even though im sure you will see some in my review, I'm still working on relearning grammer. I wish you all the best in your writing!
This strikes me more as a poem then a song, but I think you have some real potential and talent. I had sort of a Emily Dickenson feel from this poem. I guess that is just my opinion. :D ..keep up the great work!!
This poem give me an eerie feeling about the end of the world, and that we need to open our eyes to the fact the we are destroying our planet. I suppose I'm just overduing the meaning. I understood the poem, but there were parts that seemed like they needed more details.
Hi, I am trying to figure out this...is the poem telling of all of the friends we do not yet know or that we will make in the future. I am curious to know that? Also you need to seperate into stanzas, people tell me this all the time :) so I can understand I am probably not the first to say it. Overall good job on your poem, it seemed very heartfelt and sweet
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