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AGE: 37
LOC: Australia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 01

My name is Kym Packer. I’ve been writing in the twee hours for a number of years. Rating an 8.6/10 on the ambition scale. I live in Adelaide, Australia, so my pieces have some local slang and specific cultural references but I think this can only be a good thing. I’m hoping to build up a network of writers who ‘get’ my stuff and hopefully I can also enjoy reading your masterpieces as well.  

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Short Story / Lighter Pink
Version 7
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The cigarette that Mark produced from his pocket was crumpled and limp to one side. He looked to see if anyone else along the wall had noticed his abnormality. His lighter was pink, the petrol station attendant’s attempt at humour. It sparked true and he inhaled soft, remembering to avoid the drag that would bite large into his tobacco meditation. He needed to span time. To wait for her to pass through those automatic doors that sensed only her presence, where as he had sensed opportuni...
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Short Story / Greater Forces
Version 4
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My friend recently sent a letter to a government agency asking for a detail to be erased. It would not take them long, just a minor adjustment. The first interview had taken place a few years ago - after the 'incident'. Fin didn’t remember all of what he had said. But he remembered this detail. A few days later, Fin got a phone call from a government agent. It was late in the afternoon. He was drinking coffee by himself. The short black was a substitute for the meth-amphetamines he would norm...
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Short Story / Wait 50 Weeks
Version 3
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Barry heard the steady electric whir of the Citroen, the patter of Pirelli over pavers, engine off . . . but no. New cars don’t have doors that slam shut: but not even a polite click? Barry knew they were finishing off a conversation about him, otherwise they’d just come inside. A deliberate, regular breath in for three seconds, then exhale. Repeat five times. A deliberate, regular breath for five seconds, then exhale, Fucking bitch, torturing me. Elaine Snow sat in the car with her daughter,...
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Non-fiction / Australian Rules
Version 1
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My friend’s house is a stone’s throw from the Norwood Football Ground, closer than a decent car park. We walk the Parade, along with others converging for the game. Some supporters showed no outward indication of their allegiance, while others revelled in team colours that decorated scarfs, tops and beanies - these people have no intention of shopping at ‘Blooms’ or ‘Dignity and Impudence’. They are all football followers, hoping to claim victory from the jaws of conceit. The members of two t...
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Short Story / Sliding off the Red Roof
Version 1
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Footsteps no longer echoed from the tiled, mosaic floor that fashioned the main passage of Paringa Hall. From the doorway we moved across the hall, checking once again for a Marist presence before entering Mr Brown’s office. The door was always unlocked, even on weekends. Dean’s hands passed over the hooks until he came upon the tower key, nervously laughing at the ease of our escapade. Tip-toeing back over the faded floor, we pretended to be heading to the billiards room, before veering left...
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Poetry / Sea of Change
Loved it! Wonderful blend of metaphor, straight imagery and an unfolding of consciousness. I physically felt the waves rising and falling - it certainly rocked me. Keep it up.
You have an interesting patchwork here, but you are asking a lot for your reader to go through so much backstory. You say you are writing a novel. This reads like a biography or even research. I don't doubt your ability to write, however, you may need to go back to the drawing board and think about structure. A dramatic thread to join up this patchwork is the missing ingredient. You need to give the reader a reason to want to go on. A novelist should try and meet their reader halfway. Each ch...
I found it very easy to connect with this piece. It flowed well. I'm just not sure about the second last sentence - maybe this point needs to be expanded?
Journalism / a patriot.
A fine editorial. It's really important that people become more aware about this act, and individual accounts of those effected by this legisation can only help sway people to raise their concerns to the new Democrat majority.
This piece has quite a bit of spunk. I want to know more about the dogicide thing. I'd leave out the 2nd and 3rd sentences, or put them later. Too much info too soon. Leave 'um hanging on the dogicide.