Kye's profile
AGE:
28
LOC: Minneapolis, MN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 28
LOC: Minneapolis, MN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 28
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Prologue: i cast a stone into the open fire waiting for it to melt the last immortal i am Kye creature of legends and owner of none strife is my quill discontent, my parchment my inner peace a gem far too costly to buy Chapter 1: Kye and the Bear The sun peaked over the mountain tops, kissing the violet fields that lay beyond the base. The silent humming of daylight was making its way across the world, and in the quiet before-dawn came the sharp cracking of twigs. “Kye!” Timpkin pushed aside ...
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Lady in the Lake, Grant me a nights peace Let me find my slumber Kye laid down before the ashes of fire long dead waiting for the threshold of night to embrace her in the never-ending dark she stepped out of glistening waters and trickled to the sleeping form with her cool bowl she wiped away the death upon the girl's face sweetly “Lonely Kye, strong Kye breathe easy and find a moment of serenity before harsh light of day consumes you.” “You know my name Lady?” “Yes. Quiet now. The darkness c...
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Nice bit here. The beginning "so?" confused me a bit, but nothing that I could get around eventually. I like that this piece isn't cliche. It stands on its own quite well without sounding tired or overdone.
Fix that stupid sentence that got away from you. Don't let too many people bitch at you about the ending. Be surprised that no one has asked "What exactly DID destroy the world?"
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