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AGE:
45
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 03
LOC: United Kingdom
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: April 03
I have been writing for a few years now. I tend to write novels or short stories which explore alternative social scenarios or fantasies. I am often interested in alternative sexual scenarios, so my writing is often erotic, although rarely traditionally romantic. I am also interested in combining economic, social and political ideas with plots.
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Priestess Under Occupation : Chapter 1 copyright 2006 Kurt Rellians She took to the stairs and descended as rapidly as her Prancirian shoes would allow. The General was nowhere to be seen for which she was grateful. His guard was waiting for her at the door, however, the one who had looked at her impudently and with evident sexual interest when she had arrived. She had registered the man on her arrival as one who was too haughty and only pretended respect because his masters ordered it. She ...
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This was a good opening to your novel. It succeeded in making me want to find out more of Ludovico's story, who he is, why he is immortal, what purpose or power he may prove to have. The conversation with Leonardo DaVinci places Ludovico in our history and allows discussions, which although they could be regarded as a bit dry and overly philosophic by some readers, do present the necessary reasoning by which we discover answers to questions of proof and belief. I like the way you dealt with L...
This was a readable and well written story which draws the reader straight into the scenario. The beating and knife wound incident was well portrayed and was a good opening incident to raise the level of excitement and make the reader want to read on. I did find it a little strange that Walter refused to get further medical treatment for his wound, which I was half expecting might kill him at one point. I liked the politics and the social political scenario. It was realistic and relevant and ...
Again an enjoyable and comic piece. You broaden the cast to include Lucius Sabius Niger and Castor, and also at the end the Empress Domina. The complexity of Roman trade and taxation is well described, and the corruption of traders and officials. Lucius and Castor are both brought to life in your dialogue and your plot develops well. I did struggle a bit with some of the place names. I thought I knew the Roman world better, but I do not know where Berenice or Puteoli, Gades or Cumae are. I a...
I wondered where you would take this after Part 1. You have chosen to go more deeply into the change which occurs to many women when they experience motherhood. You explain this with a saucy comedy, which hooked me easily. I could visualise the stages of motherhood you described. The pace was ideal, and it never became dull. Not being a woman I am not sure I understood every comic reference, but they still work. The sexual change was well described. I have no criticisms at all. This is an ex...
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