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AGE: 32
LOC: Madill, OK
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 22

Name: Kristin Roth-Davis

Age: 31

DOB: Aug. 28, 1976

Location: Southern Oklahoma, USA

Degree: Masters in Journalism and English Lit. OSU Oklahoma State Univ. 1996

Profession: Single mother of two girls, cancer patient, English Lit professor/journalist… poetess/writer.

A stimulative thinker, an invigorating feminist with steel balls (figure of speech), and last but not least, a whimsical way of transforming a foundation of beliefs on a circumstance, when stricken to do so.

Nickname: Ornery lil’ shit …

Kris aka Kristin is a stimulative thinker, an invigorating feminist who most would say has invincible steel balls (...

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Poetry / Thunderstruck
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Storms travel in the skies of our minds these rain drops forever tell a story candied clouds crowd out all logic, electricity pulsates through these hungry veins in distance, I reach out to you. Rampant curiosity battles the sleeping refuge within; I build my world to escape through the corridors of my dreams... through these eyes of amber, time stands still ... Captivated by solitude, I grasp for air swallowing my own screams, salvation is desperately returned to me as healed wounds reinstat...
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A warrior is in constant agony, for he is aware of his true testament in life. Far across the distance he enters the realm of time, although young in body, his archaic spirit is set to quickly scan and process the ability to love. In the eyes of a warrior you'll find desire and in his touch you feel the warmth of his spirits fire. Once more the door of reflection is opened, the hearts passage becomes clearer. Love touches us once and can last a lifetime, security is evident and we indulge. Un...
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Poetry / Lord Of Steel
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Still is the dawn this day, the wind is quiet. Words fail and tumble sadly from my fingertips when it should be you I touch so gently and with such passion. Your smooth worn strength and your clear blue power are alive in me this morning. Your aliveness is flowing through my veins a gift from you a fifth of you a token and endowment from you for me to take in to treasure, to nourish and to cherish. Blossom it be, my steely lord. Night wind to thee, my steely lord and all that it pertains and ...
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Lucidly, I dream of you, I approach near; hoping to be granted of what 'is', I hear. Uncomfortably, I breach you with a stare; pouring life down on me, I am aware. Hoping to be granted of what 'is', I hear, eyes piercing my inner being, trembling fear. Unequaled and abandoned, you cry; falsely protected by your lost soul, I try. Uncomfortably, I breach you with a stare; child prodigy ~ recognized unfair. Volcanic emotions drive me near insanity; clearing my heart, detached humanity. Pouring l...
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Poetry / EvAnEsCeNcE
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Gracefully sitting on a bench at the park Listening to the music in the air Breeze caressing her lovely hair Delicate perfume is carried through til' dark. She turns the page from her book Suddenly she sensed an awkward feelin' Ignores the increasing sensation of panic She takes another quick look Muscles tighten as she begins to get a lil' frantic. Clouds are rollin' in and it's getting dark Wind is gaspin', reaching out and grabs her Quickly releasing her with a thunderous bark Heart poundi...
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Poetry / Fly Away Again
I like where you went with this piece, I see potential. However, there are a couple of grammatical errors. 1) 4th stanza, 3 line = [seak] should be [seek]. 2) 5th stanza 3rd line, [Theres] should be revised to [there are] or a different word all together. The words in this are soothing and I await to see where you go with this piece in the final end. Keep up the good work. ~Kristin~
I truly enjoy reading material such as this, for it makes you think outside the box, if you will. I appreciate the mental stimulation that this piece offers. Shedding one's skin and molding one's self is definitely a transition that the conscious doesn't seem to take foot notes on, leaving us experiencing a new revival more than not and gives us the perseverance to live in the moment. Thank you for this and I hope I wasn't off base here. I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Kristin~
Journalism / A Man of Principal
I can see this being published as you state in your author's notes and I enjoyed reading this piece. The wording, verbiage and the flow are perfect! I don't see any reason to change any of those aspects. However, I did find to small errors, that you probably over looked or have already caught and corrected. 1) First page, second paragraph - "Hills and in Sherwood and I realized my work here is..." there's one too many spaces between I and realized ... my work. 2) Third page, mid-section. Prin...
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This was quite cute! I found myself smiling in the middle and chuckling in the end. You definitely have talent and I see great potential in this piece. Keep up the great work and hope to see more of your work.