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AGE:
36
LOC: Atlanta, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 14
LOC: Atlanta, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 14
I was sitting in a restaurant last March of 2006 and I got bored so I started writing…and what came to me was a poetry of sorts…rhymed observations of the people, events, circumstances and thoughts surrounding me. From that day, the poems just kept (and keep) flowing. I’ve had to take a break from it for a while, but it is constantly there in the backgound, bubbling up, whenever I have a notepad and a pen in hand.
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Lay me Away my life went a bit well a lot (I guess) astray seemed like couldn’t make my way and now my credit with this time is gone and this old life, it’s time to say so, so long so I’ll lay me away yeah lay away can’t afford me so I’ll put myself somewhere off the rack high off the floor in the back for a time to stay and I’ll just lay myself away I’ll just lay me away till I can afford to pay my way I’ll just lay, lay far away and I don’t know how long this will take but no longer can I ...
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Soul for Sale Gave it away so many times well, at least I tried couldn’t and I cried wanting to give my soul to free never thinking this is how its always already be tried to give myself away tried to give it free tried to find a different way different way for me so I’ll just sell it this time charge a pence or maybe two my soul’s for sale how bout you? No more givin anything away these days nothing’s truly free even my love cost me and the more I charge more of the old fades away and more o...
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Fairytale Dreamin fairytale dreamin things aren’t what they’re seemin and I’m still believin after all this time in what was so deceivin this fairytale dreamin and my heart is still bleedin but I’ll just go on keepin with this world with this way with this day that may never come my way this fairytale dreamin, oh, fairytale dreamin, my little fairytale dreamin so I kept, I keep, on movin doing my funny life-love groovin and I keep givin cause these days its my only way of livin with this wor...
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Um, Um Good, Tasty Like She Should saw you walkin’ away hair all astray and stopped on the spot for a moment maybe two thoughts drifted to me and you and you look so hey, hey, um, um good so so tasty like she should deliciously sexy viciously misunderstood and wonder um, um good tasty like she should if you and I could if you and I could and comin’ my way with your sexy hip sway brutal feminimity ever closer to me drinking in all of you and you look so hey, hey um, um good so so tasty like sh...
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Clubhouse 7-14-2006 12:45 P.M. Lose Your Shit Lose your shit Have you done it? Look at those words, To “lose the shit”, that which is not needed, that which is waste. I lost my shit last week, and I let you know, now it’s your turn to go…and lost your shit, give it just quit, all this time in your mind I saw you screaming, but not to admit, why you never lose your shit? And you can look at me, as here I be, free from, I believe, that shit, exposed to you with all I admit, and will you do the ...
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Sometimes that's the way with such things, in the ignorance of others there is always a gift that brings, a reflection, maybe distorted of you, even in those comments arise from a lowly verbal IQ. Having said all that in the forgoing space, I think your retort to the intelligence challenges of others was handled with perfection and grace.
I think was a good first attempt. I am personally a big fan of lyrics that tell a story that comes full circle, so maybe, you could expand this, add a bridge and chorus that repeats. Good start, would like to see more.
Dude, you caught me off guard and made me laugh. Hell, I'm still laughing. I love writing that takes you in one direction and then smacks you in the opposite direction. So nice job. And if anyone tells you different, well, they can just suck your...
I like this work. I think the hallmark of exceptional work are words put together in such a fashion that even though the reader may not fully understand the workings of mind and words, meaning is communicated clearly, however it is received. This piece accomplishes such task despite my lack of awareness of the subject matter of Mr. Joyce, who it seems has his very own centre in Dublin. Keep up the good work.
You words were well written, in fact too well written for me. I think I will have to consult my bible and encyclopedia of Greek mythological references because I was lost...which reflects my ingnorance and not yours. I think I shall take some time to understand your references and then reread. A+. But overall I get it...and it makes me curious as to just what this person actually looks like, for if Narcissus let the gaze of his own reflection for this individual of which you write, then you h...
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