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It was a cold December evening. Mr. and Mrs. T. were sitting by the fireplace with their customary evening glass of wine. Mr. T. was reading the newspaper, while his charming wife was desperately trying to explain to him about their daughter. “Honey, don’t forget about the money.” “Okay, hon’”, said Mr. T., while reading a captivating article about the rising price of tomatoes. “She needs new shoes. You know they don’t match the beautiful hairpi...
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The following recount is based on a true story. The names of the people involved are changed. He was walking home, opening his second pack. He inserted one cigarette in his mouth, lit it with his cheap lighter and inhaled the bittersweet smoke. It was a cold December evening, maybe – 15 degrees. But he felt warm inside. His throat was sore, maybe because of the cold, maybe because of the BT that he was smoking. He couldn’t know better anyway. His head was full of thoughts. “What the fuck jus...
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The following recount is based on a true story. The names of the people involved are changed. He was walking home, opening his second pack. He inserted one cigarette in his mouth, lit it with his cheap lighter and inhaled the bittersweet smoke. It was a cold December evening, maybe – 15 degrees. But he felt warm inside. His throat was sore, maybe because of the cold, maybe because of the BT that he was smoking. He couldn’t know better anyway. His head was full of thoughts. “What the fuck jus...
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It is a really interesting plot. I like the retrospection you used in the last chapter. There is only one place that I get sort of lost: “Audrey, judging by your name tag, your name is Crew. So are you a part time mega video employee and part time student?” I wanted to lie at first, but didn’t want to start a could be relationship off with a lie. “No, actually I’m a full time employee, zero time student. I’ve lived in Seattle all my life; I love this city and the people.” It's just confusing ...
A great poem. Written from the soul, and touches the soul of the reader. I have nothing more to add except my ratings.
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It is a very well-written chapter. The fact that it makes me want to read the other ones speaks for itself.
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