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AGE:
16
LOC: Shelley, ID
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 04
LOC: Shelley, ID
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: February 04
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For lack of a better bio, I have to put this one up. So… Yeah. Until I update it at a later time, you’re stuck with this, people. : )
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His writing started when he was just seven years old in a small, fourth-grade classroom with a teacher that would end up changing his life forever. His teacher asked the class to write what he calls an ‘object specific’ story, in which included several different topics. He chose ‘What’s behind the closed door’ and went with it. He didn’t stop writing, and by the end of the class he had written the first chapter in a fantasy novel. He was hooked by the sensational charm of the way the words could go onto the page.
By the time he was eight he had finished his first novel (what he c…
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It doesn't seem like a complete story. It seems more like the prologue from a novel or a scene. It IS good though; it has nice structure and works quite well. : )
Wow, this is REALLY good. I always like stuff that deals with ancient mythology anyway, so there's really nothing bad I ca nsay about it. I just wish I knew the legend a little better, hehe. It'd make a little more sense. Good work!
I'd cut out the whole first part; it'd look better and give it more of a suspense intrigue. Also, don't use stuff like 'In rushed Shay.' It usually don't work well, and in this case, it really doesn't. This is just something I personally have, but when people wonder or think 'to themselves,' it's usually not needed. You usually don't think or wonder to other people anyway. : ) Also, alright is technically improper, as it is the standard of all right. Overall, this is a good story. I like the ...
Hi, I'll start off by saying that I couldn't understand the piece, which is what bothered me. You DO have something here, but I think it could be improved on. The point-less-ly being divided is also interesting, something I've never seen before. Keep it up! I know you can extend on this piece!
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