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This is powerful. The graphic detail really paints the picture. I've been on both sides of that scenario. I've seen and experienced that pain and attempted to escape it in a variety of ways. That kind of hatred is very complex. It's not so much hatred as it is guilt and resentment. You tell yourself you hate that person but really you just hate the situation and that you allowed that person to be put you in it. It's truly painful and it makes you wonder if any pain can be as bad as how your f...

This is a very good poem. It describes the internal and external conflict within two people due to a lie. It even appears to offer both sides of the spectrum; the one who was lied to, victim, and the actual guilty party. In the beginning the person lied to is struggling with feelings of anger and yet a desire for forgiveness, although the stress of the fact that he or she was lied to is driving him or her insane. The next stanza appears to show the liar's guilty feelings eating away at him or...

This is one of my favorite poems now. I've been in this situation more time than I can count or even begin to remember. As I was reading this it was like you were speaking through me. I can relate wit every feeling and every word of this. I'm a little hung up on how it relates to the title though. Nothing in the poem really alludes to it from what I can tell. Unless twenty-five percent is the only amount of yourself you're not willing to give to who the friend is at the time. Although it seem...

I really like this. It's a powerful piece and you get a good feel for what the girl is going through. It's easily relatable even to guys, at least for me it is. Guys can be innocent whores too. It's very well written as well. Really good job on this