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It sounds like a good rap song. Personally I don't care for rap. I'll spare you my opinion about it. I don't see very much to change here, maybe except to cut some lines so it's shorter and more easier for the ear to hear. Not every rap song in history has had profanity and it doesn't have to continue with you. Cut that shit out. The lines express your hurt well w/o profanity. That's what rap stars need to do; express more in the lines and less profanity use. If you must use profanity, then y...

This is pretty good. It sounds more like a poem than a song, but that's just my thinking. Probably take out a few lines and it'll flow well enough. I'd say your song is pop or alternative; probably alternative like the Plain White T's perhaps. Just my opinion. Just cut a couple of lines and it should flow well (Ex: If you don't give a damn, I'll ignore you with your discouragements; take out with) Just a small example.

This is pretty deep yet quite true in most respects to our species. It's about how we as a people are proud of ourselves, so proud in fact that we don't take criticism/suggestions to heart, and because of that, nothing gets changed/healed/done. Some of us refuse to change our ideals and others suffer. (Unwilling to submit suggestions,we accepted to be told nothing) That's my interpretation. People should read this; I think it will strike a chord with some and hopefully get people to think. Gr...