KellyE's profile

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AGE: 42
LOC: Canada
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: March 11

I’ve recently moved back to Canada after living in England for the past 16 years.  I’m working on my second book (altho’ I write short stories and a bit of ‘odd’ poetry as well) and would dearly love to someday walk into a bookshop and hold a copy of something I’ve written in my grubby little hands!

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Short Story / Schroedinger's Cat
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Schroedinger’s Cat I hate that damn box. Perhaps hate is too strong a word, my kind is above that sort of ugly feeling. But still, there it is. I spend most afternoons running away from the doctor, and that damnable box. It goes something like this: the doctor comes into the room, where I’m more often than not lying in that lovely warm patch on the carpet near the window. He looks right at me, and puts the box down on the floor. I see it and run. He chases me. I run some more. He sighs, goes ...
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Short Story / The Secret of My Success
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8 Reviews   2 Comments
The Secret of My Success “Mr. Smith, your next appointment is here.” Bill only had time to glance at his watch and straighten his hair before the door opened and two strangers entered. The one with the camera started silently setting up bits and pieces of equipment, while the other, a young woman with curly blonde hair and a big grin sat down opposite him. “Good afternoon Mr. Smith, thank you for agreeing to this interview. Our readers will be delighted to learn more about you.” “I’m sorry, y...
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8 Reviews   1 Comment
The next couple of weeks passed by in a blur for Grace. Her sister and friend helped to make plans for her upcoming nuptials, but, while Grace participated in these activities with a seemingly improved disposition, her heart was not improved. She longed for a distraction, anything, however small, which would take her away from the interminable planning of her future by others, and which would throw her into the path of her desired destiny, one shared with... him. One evening, after a particul...
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Poetry / Jewel
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5 Reviews   1 Comment
Jewel Listen reader, to my tale About a girl called Jewel; And all the things t’were done to her By her ‘friends’ at school. Despite her name this lonely girl Was very very plain; The only way she shined at all Was through her clever brain. She aced in math, excelled in French And did the best in art; She tried her best to befriend all (She had a great big heart). But sadly at poor Jewel’s school There was a girly mob, Who hated Jewel and all her skills To cause pain was their job. They start...
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Short Story / Grace: Part the Third
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Later that day, Grace was sitting with her leg raised on a cushion on the footstool, when Fanny showed Emily into the parlour. She rushed over to Grace and threw her arms around her friend’s shoulders. “Dearest Grace, whatever have you done to yourself, my goodness you are in terrible shape, you look very ill indeed!” “Emily dearest, you are sweet, but don’t worry, it’s not serious, the doctor has been, my father called for him after breakfast, he has told me to keep my foot raised for a day ...
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Short Story / Hot Fried Chicken
There's that debate about whether a story actually needs a prologue or not. You should be able to introduce everything you've got here in the first chapter, maybe not so directly as you have but more tantilisingly so. I would say get rid of the prologue altogether. I would also say that I find the fact that Jerry doesn't know how violent his girlfriend/common-law wife is unbelieveable, particularly after so much time together. Maybe you can say that he's seen hints of it in the past, little t...
Short Story / The Nunnery (Revised)
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Short Story / saving brother brian
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Short Story / A Lucid Moment
This is an amazing story, made even more amazing by your dedication. The way you work in your narrator's past memories with what (we suppose) is the present is extremely well done, as is the 'twist' at the end. I agree with you, while this isn't what would traditionally be termed a horror story, it's realism is horrific. It's a sad tale and your writing style and description is well-suited to the telling of the tale.
Short Story / The Dying Man
It's nice that you've informed us that your story has been published but I wonder if it has been in the format you've presented. There are a few grammatical errors and at least one typo that I've spotted. Also, you've said that this is a testament to your twisted ending style of writing. I honestly do not see anything twisted at all about a man who's basically done himself in by smoking. You smoke, you die of lung cancer. Where's the twist? I was confused by the middle of your story because y...