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LOC: Auburn, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 21
LOC: Auburn, WA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: December 21
I write lots of stuff, but usually just throw it away or something, so I figured I would try actually doing something with it.
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Elizabeth could still feel the stinging on her cheek where her father had hit her, she knew it wasn't his fault; it was the alcohol he continuously consumed. Her mother walked into the room and pressed a cool, damp cloth against the wound. "Honey, you’ve got to forgive your father. When he's sober he'll feel dreadful for striking you," Her mother said in a soothing tone. "Are you still going to ground me for being out past curfew?" Elizabeth asked, hoping her mother would say she got penalty...
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(This was a school assignment a couple months ago: to write what we would have put on our grave if we died today. I submitted this, and recieved full credit.) Friends and family weep Under all these flowers lies a girl with dreams Cut now into a thousand pieces Kept in her heart, was always those dreams Yet in death they have changed to achievements Of course, she wished she could stay Until we see her again, in our hearts she will be (Notice what it says vertically. As I said, I recieved ful...
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I have a magazine called 'Revolve' that contains the complete New Testament, rephrased for easier understanding. I opened it up, and it starts with the book of Matthew. I am one of those people who asks questions about everything, and I have a few questions about some of the verses. If you could answer them in your spare time, that'd be great. I'm sure I will have plenty more questions as I read further. See you Wednesday! 1). Matthew 5:34 (as rephrased in magazine) "But I tell you, never swe...
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That was really good. For people who identify with music, that was really sweet. :-)
Lol. I really enjoyed reading this, and got quite a few good laughs. My favourites were the "burglar house" and the "monkey hammocks." It was a very creative work, and I know for a couple of the ideas, I had certain people in mind. The fibre-optic hair had me thinking about my neice, she's in high school and every one of her friends has a different shade of hair, ranging from bright red to neon green. It's a bit disconcerting. Well done!
I am definately interested to see if something comes of this. It could be a great start to many things, a book, short story, etc. You did a magnificent job of providing imagery. This could be a great tragic romance thing if you wanted it to be. Well done!
Haha, this made me laugh. And I like the names you chose for the characters. A few of the names instantly got my attention and my image of them was a bit disrupted. Or maybe you wanted the reader to imagine JKR's characters? Either way, I definately pictured Severus Snape and Lucius Malfoy. I think if you wanted to get this publised, you would have to change recognizable names.
I think it was really good, and good luck getting an agent. There's not much I can see that I would change, it's really terrific already. Great job. =]
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