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LOC: Australia
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LAST LOGIN: October 26
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Tell Me a Secret. Preface I folded the piece of paper in my hands to fit the size of an envelope. I heard a scream coming from down the hall; I dropped my letter and ran to my children’s room. “Are you both okay?” I asked as soon as I was in their room. My six year old daughter ran up to me to grab hold of my legs crying. “No! D was telling me about the ghosts that come into our room at night. It's not true. Is it mummy?” Lizzy looked up at me desperately, fear...
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I live in a world of pretend not of pixies and fairies but of happiness and love it's a world that isn't real but it's amazing how it makes me feel. When I'm there I feel like me live I'm everything I want to be, but when I'm anywhere else I feel like I can't be myself I'm faking a smile, pretending to laugh but all I want to do is go back to my world. The real world is fading slowly I'm drifting further and further away further into my world away from anything painful from anything sad or co...
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I really like this story. There is a good set up for your world, and for your characters. You have an easy to follow plot starting. And the foundation for a good story. :)
I enjoyed this story and want to read more. So far you have a good structure and easy to follow plot, with a good set up for the characters. :), keep writing.
wow this is really good. your a very talented writer, and what a perfect world that would be. but your rhyming pattern changed on the last verse. but that is an awsome poem. Keep writing!
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