I decided to read your work because I figured if you were a decent writer I might forgive your earlier outbirst. I see, however, that I should not take your inability to properly critique written work to heart. You clearly try to hard in the actually writing of your work. And example would be your descriptive nature. This would be fine, I suppose, if you were writing a thesis. But you go overboard in your use of unique language here. Simplify it slightly. It doesn't need to be written for a 5...

The only way I can say it is that this story gives me warm fuzzies. I'm 24 years old and yes, I used that term. Anyway, very well written. I love this story. It's sweet and reminds me of a more innocent time.

This was incredibly well written. But I have to ask: which one are you? The girl in the street? The guy behind the wheel? A cop? Who? I'm curious. Anyways, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Wow. This is so morbid I don't even know what to say. The writing was good, I can see that. But the plot is just... horrible. It makes me not want to read more.

Wow. Well when you want to say something, I see you don't hold back! I like this piece. I like the jagged flow of it. Keep up the good work.

I don't know what any of this is about. But I do know that you make me want to read more. You use the sort of detailed description in your work that makes one actually feel as though he is there, seeing the scene unfold with his own eyes.

I would have to agree with the other person's review. While what you wrote was well said, you offer no solution. Quiting smoking is clearly not easy or, for the very reasons you listed, every smoker would quit immediately. It is important when you offer such an opinion or warnings to include alternatives for those who may agree with you, but need more information.

I think it is important for you to find the answers to the questions you have. Talk to your adoptive parents and family. Tell them of your curiosity. Explain to them that it is not that they aren't good enough, but you have a natural need to know where you came from. Then, go find out. There are many resources online and in the government to help you along the way. I wish you luck, my friend.I hope you find what and who you are looking for and that, when you do, you are not disappointed.

I could not agree with you more. This is not the forum for editing grammar and spelling. That's what editors are for. This is a place to share ideas and get feedback on them. Kudos to your thoughts.

You have an incredible writing ability. I love the way you use the past and the present to illustrate the story. Are you going to continue this into a sort of, "Chapter Two"? I hope so. I'm going to read some of your other works, as well. Thank you for enlightening me.