Katelyn's profile

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AGE: 15
LOC: Saint Peters, MO
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: July 26

I am here because I have been fortunate enough to have discovered I have a passion and talent for writing at a young age. I am so that I may share my work with others and it can be ruthlessly, heartlessly, and mercilessly critiqued so that I may grow as a writer and potential author.

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Query Letter / Blood Secret
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9 Reviews   2 Comments
To Whom It May Concern, My 97, 516 page novel, “Blood Secret”, is a horror story with a touch of romance, a dash of mystery, and a world of suspense, and I am seeking your representation for it. On the day Kaily Smith graduated high-school her life changed forever. When her best friend kills herself, Kaily’s brother appears after a long, unexplained absence to protect her against an unimaginable horror. Two breeds of vampires have been warring for centuries, and the secret to one’s victory li...
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Short Story / Mona Lisa
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12 Reviews   0 Comments
It was a bright Sunday afternoon in Rome, Italy. My husband Francesco del Giaconda strode along side me as we walked the winding streets back to our house. As we strode through a market, I saw a man standing alone. I looked around and as everybody hustled and bustled about, I noticed they were all with another person except for that one man. This sadden me deeply so I told my husband to go on home without me and that I would arrive back shortly. He looked at me very sternly and opened his mou...
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Short Story / Cupid
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14 Reviews   0 Comments
I am as old as time. Since man and woman inhabited Earth, I have existed, as I always will. Watching over the Earth as it has been thrust through the oblivion of time people have come and go, though humans as a race have changed little. They are born, they live, and they die. Very few have ever done anything great, and those who do are soon forgotten as self-righteous humans continue on with their monotone lives, concerned with nothing not pertaining to themselves. So self-involved are most ...
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Action Adventure / Bearing the Burden
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Poetry / TRACK BACK
I enjoyed this poem immensely. To me, it almost seems as if it could easily be made into song lyrics. I enjoyed that it wasn't akwardly worded and seemed to be fast paced. My only complaint is that you used "thru" to mean "through". I'm aware this was intentional, most likely, but I found it distracting. Other than that, great work! You're an amazing poet, and I'm sure I'll see you in a published anthology one day.
Wow. This was pretty amazing. I can relate to spending a lot of time on carefully writing out what you think is a good reveiw only to have it removed. I just think that it takes amazing talent to put that into a poem. I hoped you've enjoyed my review, review, review
Journal, Diary, & Blogging / Death
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