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LOC: Edinburg, VA
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LAST LOGIN: December 05
LOC: Edinburg, VA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 05
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These Times... These times call for heroes and villains Of Saints, Sailors, Prostitutes, and Johns To make it through the short days And nights that are long To see a light in an abyss of perpetual darkness To open a door in an empty hallway To find reasons to stop leaving And Just to stay These Times... These times have us fornicating like Some generic Energizer bunny Have us laughing at anything And everything that's not funny They have us selling our souls For a new appliance While fatc...
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I’m writing one last verse Before I go One last bridge, one last refrain One last legacy to my less than stellar name One last hope One last reason One last good time In my last season Before I go I want to laugh See my kids face come aglow One last lovers kiss Before I go One last dream come true One last dance between us two One last good conversation No more I.O.U’s Before I go I need to know I’ve done my job That I have changed a life Helped relieve some strife Before I go I need to hear ...
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When I arrive Will I like what I see When I get to the gate Will I receive the key Will my children smile Or will they cry Who will mourn me On the day I die Will family be waiting With open arms Or will I be chastised By those I’ve caused harm Will she be there When I arrive To ask how I was And what it was like to be alive Will she have forgotten me Will she recognize my face Have I done all that was needed To enter this sacred place Will she see me And tell me it’s alright Will she kiss an...
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A blank sheet of paper With high aspirations Dreams of a perfect world Filled with pacification Dreams of fields Where flowers sway free It hopes for fish And Dolphins in the sea It sees a place where The happiness never stops And powder-white snow Rests on mountain tops This piece of paper Right in front of you Has dreams of its own I bet you never knew It longs for day Where the sun does shine bright And where nothing is feared In dark cursed night Where children will laugh And frolic and s...
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It can be said That life is all fun, But where is the humor In a six chamber gun An elegant and eloquent Way to start the night Pull the trigger, Walk towards the light Arrive with arms wide open And a smile on your face See if merciful God Deems you worthy of his grace A million souls waiting For a million more to come Nothing they can do, but drift Until oblivion So you start to discover Heaven’s not all it seems Not the white clouds and rainbows You’ve seen in all your dreams and movie sce...
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This is great. It was heartbreaking, going from the idea that everything will be fine in time, to the fact that, no it won't. Some of the pain and feelings will fade, but not all. As for the rhyme scheme, it was fine. I don't believe there should always BE a rhyme scheme. If it rhymes, great... if not, great. As for the structure, I would make each line a little longer, perhaps making every two lines one. The constant short lines makes it a little les interesting, each small line is valued le...
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