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i like the effort and think it's a good practice to write with the songs that inspire us, however, we have to make sure that we maintain the integrity of originality. i went back and listened to the song by jamestown...i'm very unfamiliar with this band but your lyrics sound familiar to this song. the recording i heard of the jamestown song was really scratchy, so it was hard to determine... if the lyrics are similar, that's okay. you've got the foundation for a good piece. i would suggest wo...

i like this...i think i get it...it's not my favorite style but you've pulled it off. this sounds like something you might read in dangerous liasons "radar searchlight" - is that what we're calling it these days? i see in your profile that you're 53 and the subject here seems to be a young, fertile gal interesting dynamic...hope i'm not reading too much into that

i get what you're saying here and i don't disagree that plastic surgery is a terribly misused procedure and it's growing popularity is disgusting... quick question, what empowers the "I" to refer to itself as "the true creative soul"? What validates this statement...your opinion of yourself, someone else's? i'm curious it just seems to be assuming... also, the tone of this piece is vengeful and you declare your subject to be an "enemy". why the disdain? when you put yourself as the first pers...

i like this quote...even if i didn't know what prose was, the imagery you've created with the sandpaper lets me know that "refinement" is taking place...