Josephrutledge's profile
AGE:
27
LOC: Douglasville, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 13
LOC: Douglasville, GA
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: September 13
Joseph Rutledge is a person. He despises just about everything and everyone except for Car Crashes and people who name their pets teddy bear. Between working on a novel and writing numerous Flash Fiction Pieces he works on his collection of Prosthetic Limbs and it is growing rather significantly.
He would like you to know that his favorite thing is to start riots and he also wants you to know that he cannot be stopped, not even by Jesse Jackson.
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She slid her arm beneath me, under my neck. Gripping my hair, and moaning slightly as I slid my penis against her sopping wet vagina. It doesn’t take much for her. It never really has. I groaned too, maneuvered myself so as to slide it in halfway, it’s usually just halfway in, unless we get really into it, then no limb or torn skin matters, then and only then, we are passion immaculate. She moaned and I had came inside of her for the first time, we decided to try it, to see what would happen ...
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Flash. They tell me to turn to the left. Okay, now to the right. They measure me, take more pictures, flash and turn, okay, again. They want me because I am short, 4’8”, and I will fit into the Mickey Mouse suit. I have a cheery disposition and a lack of any felonies on my record. They tell me, the last Captain Hook we hired was a child molester, said he slipped through the cracks. They say they are still fighting lawsuits on that one. They say they have to be more careful. I am pushed out of...
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I am a 25 year old adult male with sociopathic tendencies but this story made me cry, I am actually ashamed of myself. It started off a little slow but picked up in its pacing after the first few paragraphs and then the ending was a good surprise, expected but at the same time unexpected. It's hard to pinpoint. I love it, this is worthy of the New Yorker and I hope you find a good home for this. If you don't I will be amazed. Sorry if this is not the kind of constructive criticism you needed ...
This seems a little like an allegory in the way that you are telling and not showing. For instance: "But the other man was a notorious bandit," this kind of reminds me of the first line of the Da Vinci Code which is "The international Banker crossed the road." I threw the book across the room because why would he tell us the there is an international banker. That is not the way good writing works, do you understand what I am saying? Okay, it reminds me of Kahlil Gibran and I like that, but I ...
Hey, I like it but it is labeled under criticism when it should be labeled under poetry. But you were able to get your point across and the imagery is good Thanks for the read
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