I can feel for this poem 100%. It's ironic that just this morning I woke up thinking about someone that I have lost. People go away all the time, whether it's death or ended relationships or just the whirlpool of life sucking them down. I think this poem is a great way to express the emotions that millions of people share across the globe. Great piece.

This is very heartfelt and I can tell that your baby boy means a lot to you. However I'd like to see you work on it a little more, the first thing I noticed is that you misspelled "angel" in the 1st line. Overall the poem is a bit cliche, and perhaps a little droll. Try to spice it up a little, to avoid sounding like something my great grandma would needlework into a pillow.