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AGE: 18
LOC: Canada
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 07

I am no critic, but i want my work out ther to be seen and read. most of the stuff i write has a inspirational message behind it or a faith message.

i am currently writng three novels

one is a long big series called

M.D.P

and two others with alot of work to do.

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Action Adventure / M.D.P
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 Dispatched by Central Authority Secretariat Special Task Force Defence Supervisor and Mass Duel Project (M.D.P) Advisor of The Special Defense Army To: Supervisor in Charge No. 31 7339 M.D.P No. 77 Program (June 3rd,1832 Hr) We have confirmed evidence of a intrusion into the Central Government High Class Secured Projects and Programs. The intrusions detection was located May 23rd 1334 Hours. We are currently have the intrusion under investigation on any additional evidence of re-entry i...
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Action Adventure / M.D.P
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  Prologue Government Report Government Internal Report 7339 No. 13006679 (Top Secret) Distpatched by Central Authority Secretariat Special Task Force Defence Supervisor and Mass Duel Project (M.D.P) Advisor of The Special Defense Army To: Supervisor in Charge No. 31 7339 M.D.P No. 77 Program (June 3rd,1832 Hr) We have confirmed evidence of a intrusion into the Central Government High Class Secured Projects and Programs. The intrusions detection was located May 23rd 1334 Hours. We are c...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / M.D.P
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Prologue Government Report Government Internal Report 7339 No. 13006679 (Top Secret) Distpatched by Central Authority Secretariat Special Task Force Defence Supervisor and Mass Duel Project (M.D.P) Advisor of The Special Defense Army To: Supervisor in Charge No. 31 7339 M.D.P No. 77 Program (June 3rd,1832 Hr) We have confirmed evidence of a intrusion into the Central Government High Class Secured Projects and Programs. The intrusions detection was located May 23rd 1334 Hours. We are currentl...
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Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / M.D.P
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Prologue Government Report Government Internal Report 7339 No. 13006679 (Top Secret) Distpatched by Central Authority Secretariat Special Task Force Defence Supervisor and Mass Duel Project (M.D.P) Advisor of The Special Defense Army To: Supervisor in Charge No. 31 7339 M.D.P No. 77 Program (June 3rd,1832 Hr) We have confirmed evidence of a intrusion into the Central Government High Class Secured Projects and Programs. The intrusions detection was located May 23rd 1334 Hours. We are current...
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Action Adventure / M.D.P
Version 1
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Prologue Government Report Government Internal Report 7339 No. 13006679 (Top Secret) Distpatched by Central Authority Secretariat Special Task Force Defence Supervisor and Mass Duel Project (M.D.P) Advisor of The Special Defense Army To: Supervisor in Charge No. 31 7339 M.D.P No. 77 Program (June 3rd,1832 Hr) We have confirmed evidence of a intrusion into the Central Government High Class Secured Projects and Programs. The intrusions detection was located May 23rd 1334 Hours. We are current...
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Non-fiction / The House That Crack Built - Chapter 1
by solinkla
1.“Henry’s dead Betty just called.” This line seems to be out of place or that may be my amatuer writng ablitlies at this moment, but i personlay dislike this line and would have prefered to read it like the follinw line: “Betty just called and Henry's dead" thats about the extent of my knowledge at this monet with it increasing every day. the story is great and is graphical and provides imagery of what the story says. andthe situtaions are really well explained and that what kept me reading ...
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Nemesis(Recap)-Chapter 21-23
by FrakKevin
following our religious relief would this possibly be better as following our religious belief? they were the greatest things since slice bread. they were the greatest things since sliced bread. You could see was reading something off the screen of her blueberry, “Quick Mr. President, turn on the television! You could see she was reading something off the screen of her blueberry, “Quick Mr. President, turn on the television! the story has taken a interesting twist and thats cool. i didn't eve...
Non-fiction / Understanding women: A Man's guide to a woman's heart, body and soul
by toffaswanstone
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Sci Fi & Fantasy / Nemesis (Recap)-Chapter 20
by FrakKevin
its a change of pace andd it is intense. i like how the story is all about this reagan guy and how he keeps everyone on their toes and the info is scarce so that it can be revealed later on
Sci Fi & Fantasy / Nemesis (Intro)-Chapter:1-9
by FrakKevin
For the first time in awhile, I actually sat at the kitchen table and ate my breakfast. i believe you don't need the actually on her Playsystem 3. i don't know if your are avoiding advertising but i believe it would sound more authentic as Play-station othere than those minor bugs it is a great story and i believe that it keeps the reader reading.
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