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AGE:
29
LOC: Albuquerque, NM
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 30
LOC: Albuquerque, NM
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: January 30
I’m so amazing. Countless times people stop and they say to me, JCLewis, you are so amazing and so incredibly handsome. When I hear this, it reminds me to never take for granted how badass I really am. This is how I stay grounded and down to earth.
Oh and if you havent been blessed with one of my reviews that makes you clench your fist and yell at the computer screen, dont worry you will. It just takes awhile to get to everyone.
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Version 1
45 Reviews
25 Comments
The worlds gone black. Often seeing only red. Killing each other for green. Ignoring each others blues. Hiding ourselves in shades of gray. Knowing that we're really yellow. The worlds gone black. Will I ever know white again?
Version 2
54 Reviews
47 Comments
Invisible in plain sight. I am the face of pain. Maybe that's why you choose not to see. Bearing a society's shame. Dreams that now, can never be. Displaying to you my need. You see only your own. You've got a family to feed. I'm left all alone. So you continue on. Without even thinking twice. Instantly my memory is gone. Forgetting must be nice. Instead I stand my ground. The only place that's mine. Watching the world still go round. Beneath a beat up old stop sign. Years now since I was hom...
Version 1
28 Reviews
94 Comments
I gaze fondly at my own reflection. It stares back blindly. I've changed. Is anything the same? Nobody hears my voice. My whispered thoughts fall dead. At the core I see it smile. The source of my torment and pain. Tickle me, it chuckles. Then dances once again. Damn you "tickle me Elmo". Tickle me, Elmo. Someone, please... Tickle me.
Version 1
26 Reviews
33 Comments
I punch bee’s in the face, Stinging, they grope for me, Then I eat some pie at their place, Eating, they hope to see. Aunt Jemima never did Uncle Ben, Hoping, this makes a day the key, Burt and Earnie did it then, Changing, this takes away the me, Never bought a goose down mask, Never fought a moose town flask, Night is day, all the same, Blessed pain, Drink some, play the game, Confessed sane. ...endings, never end.
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A few type-o's to start so bear with me plese: ...aren't you even going to try find another way... ...People without fingers get pass me for free.” ... (Awkward structure: ...Remus asked with conniving set to his jaw...) Ok that is it for that. As to the actual meat of my review my initial response is as follows: You are quite obviously a talented writer. I like your style and thought you did very good at setting the scene for the reader, but even more importantly, you did a terriffic job wit...
This was pretty damn sweet! I'm very impressed I hope you do many more in the future... I also hope that when I get older I have a pet zebra. That's probably of little interest to you, but from my perspective it's pretty awesome. Good luck.
100.0% Review Quality (2 Votes)
Herewith, this was the best damn story in the history of the universe. I enjoyed especially all the parts where you wrote stuff and thought that my only recommendation for changes would have been for you to write more stuff. In closing, I really do enjoy this type of stuff and think that you are quite talented at stuff. Keep up the good stuff on this and any other future stuff. p.s. Your stuff is awesome!!
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