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AGE:
15
LOC: Nashville, TN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 15
LOC: Nashville, TN
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: June 15
My name is Susie, I’m fifteen, and I’m a young writer.
I live inside books, I fall in love with poems, and I sing in between.
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I wake to crisp-edged cereal and morning squintings eyes don't open fully it hurts, make the light run away. I consume and promptly fall back into the lull that I was so rudely shaken from. then the beeping squeals in my ear. ten-minute-dash my lens fluid burns away the sleep (where the hell is my sweatshirt) (why can't I ever find socks) grab dirty ones, shoes too time to fly. In the car I block the gross talk radio (can't stand this for a twenty-minute eternity) ears snug themselves into th...
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Alone in her room, Mrs. Pottle watched the clock. It was an old clock. Its formerly cream-colored background was yellowing, framed in weary wood that wore a thin coat of dust and old age. The clock seemed to sag on her otherwise completely plain wall. It begged the old woman to be taken down and placed nicely in a closet where at last, after years and years of faithful time-telling (with the occasional slip-up or two), it could be put to rest in the cool darkness. Heavenly, it thought. But Mr...
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This poem's choppiness is somewhat distracting, my mind snags on it a bit. Makes me read it sharply. I think the last two stanzas are the strongest. Note that they are also the longest, and hold the most meaning. However, the one line, "I turn to dry ice", works very well on its lonesome. I like your imagery a lot. "I dehydrate in your bitter wind" is a lovely line. On the whole, I think the poem could be a bit less vague, but it still works very well. Nice.
I love this mainly for its description and voice. It captures a day in the landromat perfectly, and with a clear voice full of personality. Nice.
You already know how amazing I think this is. Excellent, I love your description of the coffee shop in Providence and your conversations and whatnot. That's probably my favorite part.
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