That definately do, don't they? If your goal was simply to swear in a Haiku, you succeeded admirably. Are you referring to the Urbis moderators? My sexual partners and I ("the fuckers")? Both referred to collectively? This is an acceptable little bitty poem.

I really liked this. The imagery of the heart as a time bomb, the object of your affection the master plan, all of that. I like the single spindle, the erasing of moisture stains, the senses failing and collapsing. All in all, good to go.

This is a positive-feeling haiku, but a bit muzzy and unclear. Your first two lines have sharp, bright images, the third seems unrelated. Does darkness cause injury? Is sunlight a healing force? You can do better than this.

A very interesting piece about our debts to a creator (or lack thereof). I enjoyed the parallels between blade runner and frankenstein. You have excellent structure and your thought process flows really well through the piece. Your use of language is excellent. However, the piece ends on a question, and i felt a little deflated by that. It is such a strong piece i was expecting an answer one way or another. On the other hand, I also sort of liked that.