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AGE: 21
LOC: Canton, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 19

Please keep reviews short and to the point. I will return the favor. Im tired of wannabes just looking for extra points. I make an effort to say what I feel is needed and exclude any useless point hording. I expect the same in return.

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Haiku/Senryu / OGES
Version 1
6 Reviews   1 Comment
Orange and Green Eat the Splean
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Poetry / Myday(hascome)
Version 1
2 Reviews   0 Comments
Hear my mournful numbers Hear me while the beast still slumbers If he awakes within the night This shall be my final plight   As I sit and ponder on my doom Red fire paints this cluttered room Blood to be the price Ill pay A heavy wager I will raise   Devils shall come to my death So shall I burn in the depths
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What am I building? my dearest What am I working for? Why do I defy my instinct for Respect &hope &love Safety &warmth   For a future that may not exist for me   I dont want to die But I love you and what you do to me    
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Poetry / Katelyn
Version 1
1 Review   1 Comment
I have a dream In my mind A goal The sum of my desires One word She These instincts are new to me Or at least the longing to fullfill them Protection Preparation She is a force of energy That drives me Until my body can no longer support the tremendous weight of my soul I will Remain  
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Poetry / No more
Version 1
1 Review   1 Comment
Who wants to know what it is to be a monster to be feared   You can have it Im done
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Poetry / The Ride Home:
Sounds like a horrifying nightmare of a life.
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Poetry / My CountryMen
It seems the overall point of unity of all creatures, or life, is contradicted by the specifications of "Americans". As if only Americans are inclusive to this one universal group. I can understand the point though, I just think that most other people may be indirectly misdirected by that line.
Haiku/Senryu / Music-My Passion
Great. Understandable. Like to see revisions. More detail stuffed into small package.
Horror / Nikki the Wraith
A potentially great story. To keep this short, Id like to hear more detail. Not that you've not done a good job so far. I look forward to revisions.
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