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AGE:
21
LOC: Canton, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 19
LOC: Canton, OH
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 19
Please keep reviews short and to the point. I will return the favor. Im tired of wannabes just looking for extra points. I make an effort to say what I feel is needed and exclude any useless point hording. I expect the same in return.
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Hear my mournful numbers Hear me while the beast still slumbers If he awakes within the night This shall be my final plight As I sit and ponder on my doom Red fire paints this cluttered room Blood to be the price Ill pay A heavy wager I will raise Devils shall come to my death So shall I burn in the depths
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What am I building? my dearest What am I working for? Why do I defy my instinct for Respect &hope &love Safety &warmth For a future that may not exist for me I dont want to die But I love you and what you do to me
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I have a dream In my mind A goal The sum of my desires One word She These instincts are new to me Or at least the longing to fullfill them Protection Preparation She is a force of energy That drives me Until my body can no longer support the tremendous weight of my soul I will Remain
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Who wants to know what it is to be a monster to be feared You can have it Im done
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It seems the overall point of unity of all creatures, or life, is contradicted by the specifications of "Americans". As if only Americans are inclusive to this one universal group. I can understand the point though, I just think that most other people may be indirectly misdirected by that line.
Great. Understandable. Like to see revisions. More detail stuffed into small package.
A potentially great story. To keep this short, Id like to hear more detail. Not that you've not done a good job so far. I look forward to revisions.
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