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LOC: Slovakia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 15
LOC: Slovakia
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: December 15
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I liked that it provoked strong imagery in my mind, and the free verse structure works well for this one
Very nice although a tad... personally disturbing as far as taste goes ;) I enjoy the structure
Should fix the rhyme in the first two verses, first stanza was good and clear, second on lacks clarity.
Fix the spelling; otherwise it's interesting, every sentence makes me want to read at least two more, looking forward to more poetry from you.
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