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AGE:
18
LOC: Detroit, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 01
LOC: Detroit, MI
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 01
Hi, my name is Hanan. I’m 15. I’m Arabic and a very proud muslim. I’m a very nice and open minded person. I dont judge and i dont like to be judged. I got into poetry and writing in the 6th grade.. we were to write a poem. At that time i did not want to yet i did and it turned aout to b the best in the class.. so then i started writing more… and i have actually written a novel but it really needs some work.. Umm….wel…im kinda new with this urbis thing so if u wanna know anything about me just message me..thnx =)
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If love were truly blind then looks would not matter.
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Do not let your ears nor your eyes deceive your heart...
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Until sundown I must hide For then I would watch the tide Until sundown I must stay in the dark Beneath the trees… A shadow in the park. Until sundown I must hide Until sundown I must wait Until then I could hate. Until sundown I cannot shine I cannot extend the limits of my line. When sundown would turn numb… I would show the person I have become.
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Don't let your ears nor your eyes deceive your heart..
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Tears cannot cover up a broken heart Nor can they shield your soul Tears come with pain And pain from another human With pain comes great strength Yet strength cannot protect one from hurting Only ones heart can tell one when to stop Yet hearts can be deceiving A glimpse can start ones heart pumping As so can a touch When in love, one must be careful Because with pain comes tears....
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In that 1st sentance it should be "His name was Jeramy ,i met him at my aunts birthday party" this makes the party possessive.. "He was tall and had dark hair but his hair was nothing compared to his eyes ,the eyes as if i was looking into heaven." should b 'He was tall and dark haired. However, nothing compared to his eyes. When i look into his eyes, it is as if i was looking into heaven'. "I was amazed at how mature he looked as if he was actualy ten times his age, he was a year older than ...
I understand wut u said but i think 4 a quote it is too long... It would go great in the poetry section if u editted it a little and made it in poetry form, but if u want it as a qoute put it all together into a sentance or 2 or maybe 3...good luck
I like wut u are trying to say but i would scratch that last line... it would seem simpler-- "best part of your self and well being" is how i would end it... it kinda would make me prouder (if i were gay)
I like how u went on and wrote down all ur feeling and emotions.. that is good in this category.. I am touched by how u handled ur situation and how u just opened up and how u ended it.... Your free! =)
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