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tongue full of chest hair silly human, be still join me in my bath
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Living on edges, never compromising self- His last word was "Wow!"
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I am glad to see gunsaku on urbis. If you had set your goal as "Gunsaku - Overall" I would have given this a 10! I best like 11, 22 and 16,then 18. Each would stand as a single haiku. The rest would very well act as stanzas in a song, (which would technically make the entire piece a rensaku - linked verse) especially 23. Overall as haiku-senryu you have accomplished a masterful collection. Well done!
If my name was Quinn, I would be ecstatic over this piece; but it's not, so I can only see it as mediocre.
This is a very unusual haiku-senryu. I especially enjoy the last line as there is where the most dynamic action can be found. Well thought out and written.
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