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AGE:
34
LOC: Powhatan, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 10
LOC: Powhatan, VA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 10
I am a 34-year-old mom of two boys, which means that I don’t get as much time to write as I wish. I, like many other writers, want to write that great American novel. But alas, I must work despite the insanity of motherhood—oh to harness that insanity into some great ponderings that will pay collenge tuition!
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I suppose it was inevitable. What with two boys, two dogs and one house where the dirt swirls in with a strong wind, it’s destined to have happened at some point. But such a violent death seemed even beyond even the clumsy hands of my 6-year-old, Ian. How could he possibly be the one to murder the greatest superhero ever? The evidence is clear: Superman was last seen in the vicinity of the stairs, head intact. I placed him there, though I admit it, it was a hard toss rather than a soft landin...
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If she had to rate her marriage on a scale of 1 to 10, she would give it a 5. Right in the middle, exacting, balanced, but passionless. Curiously enough, if her husband were to rate it, he’d too give it a 5, but for him mediocrity meant stability and a long haul with few peaks and valleys. Just what he loved in life. But for Michelle, she was tired of the same thing all of the time and she often looked at her husband—a man she once admired and greatly loved—with something like disgust. How c...
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Bundled against the bite of February you shuffle blood red roses as your adult daughter watches, struggles to keep her scarf from snapping in the bitter wind. Her hair whips across her face as you tuck green stems into the cold cement vase built into her daddy’s head stone. You and she stiffly embrace then move slowly away.
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Clean blue broad, pearlesque set behind the shuddering leaves fading green into Fall and light. Sun leaks through misty grain, veins spidering out like hands grasping the last rays.
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I hate to say this, because I actually like this quote, but it reminds me of the Spongebob episode where SB gets all mixed up because Bubble Bass says he leaves off the pickles. There's a whole journey through playful use of language there and this reminds me of it. The episode is called "Pickles" as I recall. I like it. I am disturbed by SB popping into my head. With that being said I might suggest maybe no caps? Order--capitalized--makes me think that it should go first in the puzzle you've...
Ok this one is awesome. I love the way you interwork the imagery of Mathematics with romance. Awesome line: skin white as onion paper. The opening really pulled me in. I love the image coupled with the "eye-averting" kiss. I feel a badly about the fact that I can't find anything I'd change. I wish I could give you some specifics to work on, but this feels like a finished piece.
Hmmm. I wonder if this is really a true statement for most of us?? For you? I do like how it's said, I'm more disturbed by what is said, I guess; though I have to admit to knowing people like this.
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