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LAST LOGIN: November 20
LOC: NY, NY
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: November 20
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The Winter 09/10 issue will have a theme of “inspired by celebrity/popular entertainment.” If you’ve written poems on these topics, and would like to submit them, please send them to me by August 1.
In real life I’m a psychotherapist. Once upon a time I was a professional journalist. More recently I’ve been writing poetry. I read poetry for many years before I started writing it and I wish I could say the same about some Urbis writers/reviewers.
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5 Reviews
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You wail and say “how could we?” You wring your hands with guilt You speak of grief and sympathy Toward the ones you killed I don’t believe the sorrow As your army bombs a city I know you’ll bomb again tomorrow Despite your self-indulgent pity
Version 1
3 Reviews
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This is a song not to celebrate a bank It is no longer full of money and if you own its stock you only now hear the wails as it tanks. Or maybe a sound like the wind in the trees on the hills, which is the rustling of the thousand dollar bills that bankers took from their government bailout, while angry taxpayers fumed and flailed about. Congressional representative seem unconcerned by the question of who lives in marble halls and who has a home no more to live in. Banks foreclose on people w...
Version 1
6 Reviews
8 Comments
From Obama a stimulus plan for the good of the poor working man The rich said “no dice, It’s too high a price” But conservatives hadn’t a plan What became of the surplus of Clinton? “It got lost in Iraq”, said Bush, winkin’ But we know his tax breaks were a part of the stakes To enrich the most rich was his thinkin’ The Republicans moan and they whine, upset that it’s no longer time for fat CEOs to steal blindly from those who work hard f...
Version 2
2 Reviews
2 Comments
The food we eat has lost its taste. It’s fructose, salt and carageenan. Subsidies encourage waste; I think I might become a vegan. Hogs in pens shit day and night- - lagoons of shit that poison rivers. Unwashed produce causes fright as it jaundices livers. Poultry’s tortured, sows imprisoned, calves see barely light of day. Our forebears never envisioned we’d eat food produced this way. The factory farm is the new gulag. If you saw what happens in it I am sure you'd quickly...
Version 1
9 Reviews
15 Comments
Cracks and lines on the mirror traverse your face. Is your hair turning white, or is that coke dust from your last binge? How old you’ve gotten In a few short years. Blown-back from the mountaintop you got lost in the blizzard. Better hope someone comes looking for you.
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I find this poem intriguing although somewhat mysterious. I wondered if it might be about a woman whose longtime husband has had an affair, and she is hoping he will stay and comfort her even though he is no longer in love with her. The images are quite interesting. Suggestions for revision: "my hand in my valley" what could that possibly mean? Maybe you meant "my hand in THE valley"? "it's" should be "its."
I am not sure from your comments whether you really want a critique but then you put it in the review queue so I am going to review it. I think this is an interesting idea. I think comparing hands with "heart" and "mind" should show the old phrase "seeing is believing" in other words, what we do with our hands might have more of an impact than words that generated in our minds or feelings from our hearts. You did address that in the first two stanzas. I think you personified the hands too muc...
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