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AGE:
18
LOC: Columbus, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 24
LOC: Columbus, PA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: September 24
Well I go by the name Rayne, but my name is actually Tiffany. I exercise my individuality by disowning the name my parents gave to me. I just think there is too many Tiffanys out there.
I absolutely adore writing, and I’ve been meddling in more dramatic type stories and poems lately.
People Find me at a “Freak” table at lunch.
With the nerds and the goths and the adorable people.
They do not know we are writers, friends and artists. They just know us because we are different
I have emerged from my writing funk!! So I’m back.
Anyway, I love talking to people. So if anyone would like message me. Who knows maybe we’ll have similar interests.
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A cold blade to warm skin, an unpleasant sting followed by awaited relief. A choking sob, burning tears, Never again. Cold metal clinks to hardwood floor, a body slides down the wall. Head in hands, shoulders wrenching. Picking up his body he moved from the room. The next day at school on his locker it read, FAGGOT, FREAK! Head hung in shame. At home the blade, a welcomed friend. An unpleasant sting, awaited relief. One tear it falls, another mark made. Neve...
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The sun may shine- but the warmth does not penetrate-my skin- into my heart- which remains- cold as the blade that carves- smooth lines into a broken body- falling into the darkness- yet drowning in the light escaping the pain-impossible-it is a part of me- growing- as I diminish-losing who I was- to what I am now- tis this really the end- ragged breathing slows- to barely a beath- pulsing slowly like- like my heart but eventually all stops- withering- collasping- into dust- to be lifted away...
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Break away my soul Reavealing blackened pieces Of the person who once was Kick me when I'm down Even though I love you Never see my shining face again Where did the stars go tonight? I can feel the numbness was over me This will be my final hour However not my most honored moment Oh cruel sky won't you shine your lights Underlying pain surfaces for a moment Taking me under in a sea of blackness Reawakening, duisturbed by the sunlight filtering Evenly through the broken window Distorted fear...
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I can see my reflection in the mirror, blurry, have I lost myself in the darkness? Have the thoughts of destruction soaring through my mind carried me, broken, away from the light? I search deep inside myself the soul behind the blue eyes, lifeless, out of reach of redemption. A fist raised in anger poised for strike, hitting the offending glass sending shards falling to the ground. Blood drips to the floor turning pure diamonds to rubies as my broken reflection looms above me. My mind hates...
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Another day, another pointless visit. Bleach white walls passed him as he walked, the soles of his shoes thudding as they hit the tiles. Cautiously he pushed open the door to room 253, revealing a pale blue room. ‘Don’t run away. Everything will be okay,’ he chanted running a hand through his already unruly blonde hair. Finally realizing he was still rooted outside the room, he made his way inside. Ghosts of his mistake lurked here, haunting him. He pulled aside the blue ...
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Interesting. Not something I would normally read but well placed together.
Last line, first segment,"Now don’t worry, I’m not going to quote from each of the over 300 letter we exchanged," 300 letters? "I nodded and she dropped in onto the floor." It instead of in
I think it was great, it kept me hooked the whole time, it was very well written. A total joy to read.
Really good so far. My computer froze on me, I love these and I have read them before. I hope this will stop being stupid and let me finish. I'll be back!
I said, but in a voice that lacked the fire and edge it had once had. I suddenly felt drained of any kind of passion or hatred.” The qoutations don't belong at the end of this sentance. The detail and emotion in this peice are wonderful... I am mad that I can't finish this because I'm in classes. Its amazing though, and I will be back to read it.
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