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AGE: 26
LOC: Banning, CA
GEN: Female
LAST LOGIN: August 31

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Short Story / THE STRANGER
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Allison worked at the local hospital as a registered nurse. She was driving home late one night on her usual route when her car suddenly struck a figure walking on the side of the road. She hoped it was just a deer, but deep inside she knew otherwise. Her heavy breathing fogged the windshield and she watched her emergency lights blink. “Oh God, please don’t let him be dead,” she uttered as she slowly stepped out of her car. Kneeling next to the man’s body, she checked his pulse. It was faint...
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Short Story / Gracie
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Dear Gracie, You're fucked up. Everything about you, to be exact. It's the way you look, even the words you speak. Something is wrong with you. Even as you're reading this paragraph; I bet you're wondering exactly how I know all these things about you. Well, it's because I know you...or at least I used to know you. I spent nine years loving you, and you spent nine years loving someone else. The fucking Corona bottle. I don't like using the word "bitch," especially in reference to you, but you...
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Haiku/Senryu / The Desert
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Brown plants, tall and dry Dust clouds rolling rapidly Dark skies, but no rain
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Quotes / A Good Day, Gone
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3 Reviews   1 Comment
A good day, gone. Lost in a flood of moving time. Erased from existance by passing minutes; never to return.
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Short Story / Angie
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"No one wants to be around Angie since the accident," Nick told his mother. She just shook her head in silence. "Can't people see that I love her?" "Nick, just go home," she said. "And if you must return, please don't bring that girl with you." He turned from her and walked silently down the road. He felt alone and didn't understand why his friends and family didn't like Angie. Just one day before, his friend Stan refused an invitation to the movies when he found out Angie was going too. "Why...
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Poetry / EmmDogg
LOL! Very humorous!! My only critique as that some people may no understand the slang you've used here, such as the word "coug" so you might want to check that.
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Amazing writing. I don't know if it's just my morbid side coming out or what. Jeff is definitely disturbed and I do kinds feel sorry for the guy. I want to go back and read the first part of this up until this point. The descriptions you give are clear and this piece is easy to read - loved that! I honestly couldn't see anything wrong with it. The language fit. The dialogue between characters fit. Except there is one line where the victim calls Jeff a 'crazy fucker' and I think it would have ...
I don't know how convincing this story will be for Tolkien fans, (whose books I've never read) but I do like this story. The only thing I had to go on was the re-cap of all the chapters, but the conflicts that arise seem like valid ones by supernatural standards. The classics teach us that two people who love each other can never end up together, and when Mikell was lying in bed nearly dead, but gut clenched up. I think his recovery was too quick, but that's just my opinion. You begin part 8 ...
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Short Story / Aftermath
Novel Treatments / Am I Ready To Publish My Fiction
Poetry / Comfort Care
Crime, Thrillers & Mystery / Scratch the Surface - Chapter 3

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