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wow that is bad for a writer? of are you a writer if you can't read or write? or are you mocking thos ethat can't read or write? that would be rather mean and condescentingt! the English teacher in me doesn't approve. I don't think you will win anyone over by using bad grammar and spelling. Also technicall 'cant' are two words 'can not'. this may disqualify you!

so what about the rich? everyone is either strong or weak, so everyone dies young? this sounds very brutal and hopeless! why is everyone killing everyone?

I like it. It discripes fate and chance. Somehow it has a mysterious air to it. Good job!