FrakKevin's profile
AGE:
20
LOC: Charleston, SC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 20
LOC: Charleston, SC
GEN: Male
LAST LOGIN: November 20
My name is Kevin and I like writing Scifi Dramas. Some people dislike my reviews because I usually dont concentrate on grammar, but I’m not that good at grammar so last thing I should be doing is giving somebody else advice on it. I’m a good storyteller…that’s why I tend to care about the actually plot more. There’s nothing worst than a well written , but boring or uncreative story.I hate being critiqued…Urbis is helping me get over that.
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He fired at not at Bob-remove the first at not much to complain about. I still like being in the dark. Sometimes I get annoyed and feel things get dragged out in mysteries. With your story you create a lot of questions and you answer them with more. I really hope you know where you're going with this. I'm willing to follow it to the end.
Very good detail. And all the emotion added to the very good dialog. I thought this was funny but at the same time wrapped up in this very good mystery.I hate liking stuff on Urbis because it's our job to point out faults...but to me this was perfect...the guy in the beginning was creepy...even creepier once I found out she was teen. I'm not sure what she is but I'm sure we'll find out.
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