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I've read the previous chapters and so far it's okay. It's still coming off as the rich kid with a billion problems, but judging by what you said in the notes...this will change. You also are a very good writer...more skilled than me. You dont seem to rush your stories to get to a certain point and give a good amout of detail to give a clear understanding of who this character is.

I read the first chapter, and now I see it was just a way of introducing us to this character and his job. I'm not sure are not if you mentioned this Whiteman Chris before though. So far I love your story,,and It's rare I find chapters in my que to read.I think you have talent and I've been drawn in once again by the storyline.