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Silent whispers of empty creaking chairs hollow sounds reach my deaf ears. The world's vibrance has now faded and blurred to become something I am not of. Time moves and I am still, the ticking of the clock sounds yet I am still on the outside.
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Down from the heavens I hear your cry, The tears fall fall from the clear blue sky, I wander alone as I've lost my way, As the tears of sorrow are here to stay. Down from the heavens I feel your shame, As you have taken all the blame, I see clearly the haze has past, I take a burden and the world is outclassed. Down from the heavens I hear your joy, As you rejoice in this world's new toy, I appear to tend and mend, Playful as a child's new friend. Down the the heavens I hear your glee, As the...
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I don't quite get your meaning. Not clear as to any point that is trying to be made. As for the title I don't see how it jives with your writing.
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I find this to be fairly inspiring for a writer. Looking fopr something to just work for once instead of always working and working and working some more for it. In another way of looking at it you have to love to write to get anywhere with it. SO you hope that as a writer your writings love you back. ^.^ AT least this is what I have managed to get out of it. It works for me. Great job!!
I am not sure what you meant overall, but in terms of being able to be able to apply it to everyone it definitely fits the bill. The obscurity of the meaning here can be applied for many different things from the literal sense to a figurative sense that success is that much sweeter because there has been failure. (At least in my mind). In terms of a creative life I find it slightly more difficult to apply. I suppose that's just me though. I like the optimism shown though and I congratulate su...
Intresting imagry here. I guess it really can be seen in terms of a writer as we all scratch our heads trying to figure out what we're going to write or een supposed to write whether it be a paper or eve a short story. I find this a great idea/image for writers!! Good work.
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